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Glory Days by Crimson

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From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-06-10

Chapter: 27

Glad you' finally see that Rob is on your side. He is your bro Chester. Hope you have a good night sleep.

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-06-07

Chapter: 26

Sorry for my late review, but wow what a chapter! I'm glad Chester saved Rob, even though he was upset he did it because Captain Shinoda wanted him to. I understand he's upset with Rob, but I think Rob sincerely didn't know that Christopher was an ally. I mean, come on! He jumps into an enemy ship full of pirates that kidnapped Chester, and does all he can to save Chester, even when Chester turned violent towards him. It was a huge misunderstanding, but I hope they can forgive each other and have peace within the crew again. I love Captain Shinoda's comforting, he always knows exactly what to say and do to calm Chester down and get him to open up. They really are perfect for each other. I loved the line, "Throwing you overboard is still an option" it was so cute, I loved the subtle humor even in a serious moment. And Chester's response is perfect, of course Captain might get mad and throw him overboard, but he'd always jump in right after to save him. I'm really excited to see what happens next, I'm so glad this story is still going strong, even after 26 chapters! Keep up your amazing writing! :)

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-06-07

Chapter: 26

I'm still not convinced about Rob. I think he was just too bad (which is insanely hot, mind you ;P) in the beginning and it's gonna take a bit for me to warm up to him. Chester shouldn't feel bad about Christopher, it wasn't his fault. It'll be interesting to see what happens next for them all

From: Chesterella

Date: 2014-06-06

Chapter: 26

I'm not comfortable that rob says sorry...

From: nab

Date: 2014-06-06

Chapter: 26

It's good that Chester talked to mike. He cannot keep it all in, it's no it healthy. Wish there's more conversation involving Joe,brad and phoenix

From: Hailey

Date: 2014-06-06

Chapter: 26

Chester tried to save Rob but something in the heart of the guy stopped him? He's too angry at Rob to help him I support the decision. Rob wants the goods from Captain Shinoda and he wants to kick out sentiments between them two. But he won't ;-)

From: wz

Date: 2014-06-06

Chapter: 26

Please update soon I'm dying to know where they're going!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

awww i knew it! I knew Chester would not let me disappointed. He saved Rob...amazing. He was already a mature private with wise mind.

I got so nervous when Captain Aristov held the sword toward Chester. He almost killed him! Sinuous bastard!! he deserved to die in hell! Then Captain Shinoda shouted “Fire” in that moment…omg, I was like going to cry for that. For that sake, Chester got a chance to defeat Aristov. I danced for that for awhile.

I’ve never seen a man like Captain Shinoda…can be so hot, strong and lovely as well. I love the scene he taking care of Chester and comforting him. They are meant to be together. No one can break them.

From: trishia

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

i think they were rivals because the other captain wanted chester too..did he like chester more than he shouldve? *kicks his dead body * mike is attractive in this story omg..mike is attractive always *rolls on the floor drooling* i love your story *smooches*

From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

You killed without a thought but Rob killed someone by accident and you won't forgive to the point you would have let him die! Until you forgive Rob & go on with your life, you will never have a good night sleep again.

From: RASH

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

PERFECTION I WANT TO WRITE LIKE YOU IN ENGLISH

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

my idol you updated ♡ I didnt miss this lmao can we please fawn at the love between him and captain shinoda?? cutiesss Im in aw moments 24/7 but rob?!! he has a problem!!

From: eggplant

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

Rob go save yourself. Nobody cares if you live or die. Useless human. He did it because he wanted to and he will make someone feel hurt again soon, I feel it.

Greetings

From: CryCry

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

They just cannot get a break... I'm still not sure if I should believe Rob. IDIOT!


Now the nightmares.. Poor Chaz.

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

Poor Chester... I started crying at how vivid your description is of his pain, of losing Christopher. He was a nice boy. I wish he didn't have to die like that, and Rob does sound sincere... but I still don't like him. It was so beautiful how Mike and Chester shared their personal moment together to discover what was bothering Chester... and the kisses. AWHJFDFHJA I gushed so bad. And the bandage wrapping. But poor Chester, that was an awful nightmare, even I felt terrorised. Those will keep haunting him... because he feels guilty. I hope he gets over it soon. What can I say? Wonderful chapter, as always. So interesting, and so rightly paced. Thank you for sharing. Can't wait for the update! P.S: I'm so happy Chester bitch stabbed Aristov, HA.

From: wz

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 26

Here's a proof that Chester has a big heart. He would have saved Rob, he just didn't want to with all his mind because of what Rob purposely did (I'm sorry but it was purposeful to me). Anyway he faced the most dangerous pirate with a lot of courage despite the trap, he held onto his inner strength, the one he gained after being with Shinoda long enough. That was beautifully written. He cared so much and still cares so much about everyone in the crew, especially his closest lover. That's exactly who Chester is, such a nice boy. That nightmare confirmed his kindness, he's still so scared of having abandoned someone to their wrong destiny, he just keeps at it forever. "Help me forget everything", most beautiful line I've seen this month, it had so much in it. I really loved reading that, kinda stopped on it thrice to re-read it. You're the best, Crimson. I esteem you. Can't wait for the next chapter and for more love, I have a feeling this will end very well.

From: eggplant

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 25

Rob is a liar.

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 25

Firstly, like I have been saying for all the other stories I've missed, I am so extremely sorry for this late review! I was really caught up in work, and had to take out time to sit and read everyone's work properly! Oh my, what a chapter! Poor Christopher, it really pained me that he had to die, the poor boy... He even helped Chester, and risked himself, which never paid off. I wish he'd gotten the chance to join Mike's crew, but well. Aristov is a fucking dick who needs a sword up his crack. And Rob... Chester does need to save him, no matter their differences or jealousy, and no matter if he killed Christopher, which as he says, was an accident. I can't wait to see what happens next, this story is like a page extracted from the novella of a real pirate, do you have pirate blood in your veins? HAHAHHAA great chapter, please update soon! Take care! Cheers.

From: trishia

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 25

omg rob go to hell *dies crying* dont lie you did it because you wanted

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 25

ROB YOU ASSHOLE

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