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From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-06-28

Chapter: 29

Such a beautiful, beautiful story. I missed the last two chapters, so I read all of them together, and the sex, the love, the action, and all the sadness and drama is so perfect and well-depicted, I feel like I'm watching a movie. You're so talented, Crimson, I mean it. I absolutely adore the playfulness and affection between every crew member, it's such a natural bond, and I am so happy that Chester let go of his ego and forgave Rob... who seems to be a nice guy now. I can't wait to read more, and I am scared about what waits on these Russian shores for them. Be careful pirates! Update soon, and I am really sorry for this late review.

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-06-27

Chapter: 29

owee too bad you changed your bio!! I loved it that you said a bit more about you and your point of view ♡ it made me smile!!

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-06-27

Chapter: 29

Agh, I am so sorry for the late review! This chapter was amazing, I was almost screaming when Chester was fighting the pirate up on the boom! Damn, Chester, that scared the crap out of me, but I'm glad he was okay. Your action scenes are so real and exciting, it is such a huge skill, something I'm not too good at myself, so I really love to read them. Hmmm, maybe there's something happening between Brad and Rob now? That would be an interesting twist, I'm curious how that will develop, or not develop. Finally they made it to land, being out of supplies made me so nervous for them! I can't wait to see what happens next, and if Anna will be in the story. I'm so happy this story has continued on for so long! Update soon!

From: Eleni

Date: 2014-06-26

Chapter: 29

I read it all and can't get enough - 3-

I went to your profile to see the author first and saw your stories I was uncertain.. then read your bio I giggled XD

IT IS STRETCHED AND HARD XD subMike in general is just UGH XDD fantasy floating!!

I want leave a review for cute curly chaz in this story he's my fav I want to snuggles him. captain Shinoda is a strong man but other pirates dont look like knowing him! they have to be scared of captain bad asshole XD update soon - 3-

I tell my friend to read joining this story!!

From: the Shinodas

Date: 2014-06-26

Chapter: 29

Sexy, how little Chester is with Mike. I had one dream night ago, Chester wearing captain's clothes. It warmed me. I decided to tell you.

From: nab

Date: 2014-06-26

Chapter: 29

Brad likes Rob? Awesome!!! But i pity the guys. It's like they cannot catch a break. One mishap after another. It's good that they got each other back.

Kudos on the fighting scenes. Really believable.

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-06-26

Chapter: 29

I read this after others because its my fav ♡ are they really really getting married? ♡♡♡

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-06-26

Chapter: 29

Your actions scenes are just awesome. I'm hopeless at them, so I admire you greatly for that alone. So what's with Brad and Rob, hmm? I thought I maybe saw a hint of Bourdelson there, no? Could be wrong. I'll have to wait and see :)


Gah, I've thought so many times that they were away from drama and would have an easy run of it for a while, and everytime I think that, you update, and BAM. Although I love it because it makes a longer story and that makes me happy, it frustrates the hell out of me coz I'm like DAMMIT! Let them have a day off, ffs!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-06-25

Chapter: 29

Hate to see Rob's hurt. Hope he gets better. Be brave guys!

From: trishia

Date: 2014-06-25

Chapter: 29

chester sounds ready for the final bond..


*cries in the distance*

From: Hailey

Date: 2014-06-25

Chapter: 29

Cool the fight :-) The crew has coordination. That intimacy back inside the ship, cute, cute. And Anna, is a pirate now? Will be a threat for them? And Chester, will they marry? :-)

From: wz

Date: 2014-06-24

Chapter: 29

“What? Were you afraid she was going to overthrow your manly dominance?”

Haahahahahahahahahaha Ways to slightly piss Shinoda off.. I can't stop laughing Hahhhaahaha But aaw they are so close and adorable, I'm biting my finger.. The way he hugs Chester close to himself makes me want to.... make them have sex? Hahaha That was so cute. What about Anna? Will he meet her again? I hope not. Or maybe, yes. Maybe she'll turn out to be something. AND EXCUSE ME FOR THE CAPS BUT "I DON'T LIKE THIS NAME" AND THE REVIEW BY FEMCHAZ MAKE ME THINK THEY'LL MARRY. I'M INTERNALLY SCREAMING. Chester Shinoda. Oh my goodness. I can't.

From: Kaph

Date: 2014-06-24

Chapter: 29

I wait for more to happen. I liked reading. In response to your reply

we made a research and, it turn out the ring is a same model. chaz had one with talinda. used it for a while. now back with the same of mike's. things going on.

From: RASH

Date: 2014-06-24

Chapter: 29

I LOVED IT I LOVE YOU

From: CryCry

Date: 2014-06-24

Chapter: 29

I just can't believe they are always dealing with some nasty stuff. It frustrates me nut at the same time makes me glad because it keeps the number of filler chapters to a minimum :D


Chester turned out to be a pretty amazing pirate, then. He was all over the ship helping people :D I love the chemistry between the captain and him. Looks like they are so in tune they can fight like that (aside from the chemistry happening between the sheets - or in their case on a hammock)


I'm glad the animosity between Chester and Rob is over. No one needs that added to the stress caused by every trouble they went through so far. I'm actually quite concerned for Rob for some reason. The idiot grew on me :)


The most important question is though,


Is there something going on between Brad and Rob??! If not, is it going to happen?! Did I just see a speck of Bourdelson there?!

(Hint: That would be awesome :D )


And finally, Anna appears. Should I be worried? Will that be a triangle? Nooo.... Is Chester going to be hurt? Nooo... (I think I value Chester's condition more than the others but yeah I admit that) Anyway the way Mike spoke of her kinda relaxed me but every time a Linkin Lady appears anywhere in a slash fiction I tend to freak out. We'll see, I guess.


Also if you have not noticed already, I'm a sucker for Mike-Chester heart-to-hearts. So I enjoyed the "there will be no glory days without you" part immensely (That was so tooth achingly sweet I desire to perish.)


Sooo I loved the chapter, as always :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2014-06-23

Chapter: 29

The fighting scene is really good. It's like a movie scene played in my head. Im amazed how perfect Mike and Chester fighted together and how great those crews were for helping each other. Btw, was something happened between Rob and Brad? Brad seems so caring about him. Anyway, our bennoda is always beautiful. I love the part that Chester wanted Mike to continue on if he would die one day. It's really touching me but makes me worried. It sounds like some horrible things approaching them quickly. As you wrote, the land would be terrible. I just wonder how bad it would be to make captain Shinoda so serious and careful. I hope they would be fine with the landing. But I know you will not let them pass it easily lol

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-06-21

Chapter: 28

Ahhhh your slash is always so amazing, you're one of the best slash writers on here for sure! I loved the game at the beginning, it just made me smile to read of them playing like kids and all getting along. But then it kind of puts in a different perspective that they're doing the games just to keep warm and they're running out of supplies... I'm so worried about them, I really hope they reach land soon cause I'm starting to get a bad feeling that someone may get hurt. Captain Shinoda trying to keep his cool while Chester "tortures" him was so funny, Chester is a devious little thing hahaha. But then more drama at the end, I wonder who is on the other ship that's chasing them?!?!? Ahh, you leave it on such a cliffhanger! You kill me haha, but your writing is so amazing. Update soon!

From: Kaph

Date: 2014-06-20

Chapter: 28

I read it before once, twice. but I lost chapters. I didn't know it went far good like it is. I apologise for missing it. I see you have high rating, I'm happy!! it deserves this. captain knows what to do to make his new crew member happy. lovers now. I want to know if they marry ever in this story. because I know the Captain has the power or marrying people, he can marry himself with a person when he wants. I hope one of the days in the future chapters he gathers guts to do so as he did in real life. the rings they have are the same if you saw. do you believe its real? I think most writers here believe its real or they would write about some else pairings. with the wife by example. I'm sorry for this long review. I'm trying to learn english better, comment better without the use of the translator like before. I hope you're not bothered.

rob falls in love with chester from earliest chapters. he wants mike's dick and never had it so he takes it out on who can. pussy. he doesn't want to fuck with you. he's a man.

chester has a mental connection with cristopher, can't forget who the guy was and how they were the same. was he scared of the weakness he had seeing cris? he saw him be killed by rob thinking he was the next on rob's list. I too think rob did it on purpose he wants to scare ches, perhaps. I think mike has to punch rob in the face hard and make him understand he doesn't have to go closer to what doesn't belong to him.

I start reading other of your stories now. if it's not ok for you to receive long reviews tell me. I don't want to be a bad person. thanks for writing this story

From: Kaph

Date: 2014-06-20

Chapter: 28

I got suggested this. I'm glad I started to reading it.

From: trishia

Date: 2014-06-19

Chapter: 28

*brain explodes*


*DIES*


*DIES TWICE*

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