Oh, this story makes my heart stop with every single chapter! It's just perfect!

So, I want to strike a bargain :)

Well, English is not my mother tongue. And (if you let me to do it, of course) I want to translate your work into Russian ;)

In my opinion it would be great, 'cause I'm pretty sure that your story could be one of the most popular and interesting one among others in Russia ^^

So, I hope that you're as interested in this offer as me :)

P.S.: my English isn't that perfect... sorry ^^

oh their love…I cannot watch it… it was too brilliant. I couldn’t believe the soldier just witnessed the most beautiful love in this world and still held the gun behind Mike’s head. Fuck him!

I was holding my breath when I read the part…I feared Mike or Chester would die because of it. I cannot imagine how each of them lived without the other.

my love for this story can't be expressd

CHAPTER 30 DAAAAMN

MIKE WHERE DID YOU GO WE MISS YOU SO AND CHESTER'S BUM MISSES YOU TOO

Agh, noooo how could they take Captain Shinoda??? Brad, you useless lump of a pirate, how could you let this happen? I knew splitting up would be a bad idea... I wonder how the troops from Norfolk knew they'd be there? I hope there's not a snitch in the crew, but I think I trust everybody. For now. I love how Chester is emerging as a leader in the crew, his knowledge from living in Norfolk is really helping them, and it makes me really happy that he's found a home. Looks like his leadership will be needed again until they get the Captain back. Please update soon, because you can't leave it there for too long, you just can't!

Hahaha "how much of a pig captain is" hey, Chester would be not happy abut that lol. It reminds me of that Mike and brad went to a strip club in a LPTV lol

Hummm so...Mike was taken by those Norfolks? Probably, he was so handsome that he got a lot of attention from those people?

OMG NO*cries in the room* HOW COULD THEY DO THIS TO CAPTAIN HE CANT *kills them all*

I am angry :-/ Captain, you can't leave your Chester alone.

Omg I just sat down and read all 30 chapters in one go xD I love the storyline so far! I just wish Chester and Mike would finally get a break. Maybe they'll find peacebin Japan c: Craving your next update! c:

Ohh man! You guys need to stick together! Find the Captain!

I feel to holding Chaz. he is alone now. can he live with him self without his lover? how did they take a giant like Captain away?

First Chester and now Captain???!!!

I can't believe they got a hold of him. I really want to know what happened that Mike was caught but I suppose we'll learn in the upcoming chapter (which I hope is coming soon because the suspense is killing me) Oh, also what are Norfolk soldiers doing there? Couldn't they just let it go?

And I was looking forward to adventures in Japan.

Btw, there are totally hints of Bourdelson :D which makes me happy.

Proud of you. You're close to 4000 views and have a 25.

What is going on, on this ship. Shinoda, kick their asses and get back there. They need your presence. I can't wait to know how this story ends. It's killing me.

Greetings

-gasp- They taken Captain Shinoda? I hope, not Anna to take advantage of him. I worry! How does Chester react to it? The crew is lost without the captain.

I see, you have 24 rate. Are you happy? -throwing color ful paper to you- I am happy! M/C story that never stops to amaze us reading!

I want to be honest, with you. When this story is over, I have feelings that you write a even better story, about LP Bennoda. I know you make our dream be happen!

Summer is boring in all the countries. Fic is the only escape for us. You do the goodest job. Sorry my bad English!

This site is my entertainment.

I have a bad internet I hate myself, I miss rupdates Im so sorry!!!! how did they take a man like mike?? there must be a mistake!

THEY TOOK HIM???!! HOW OMG NO 0 0)

AND FUCK THOSE PIRATES.

I want to capslock this comment so bad but I don't want to spam your reviews so I'm going to do that over twitter and meanwhile freak out at your update because it's driving me insane and now I'm also reading femChaz's comments about the rings and everyone going crazy about the marriage and this chapter is killing me because it's short and I'm not putting punctuation to emphasize the fact that I'm wanting to caps this comment so anyway if you don't update soon I'm going to steal your underwear tonight you can't do this to me ok

They got the captain? Crap. Now it's gonna be a rescue mission with only 5 people, 1 of which is recovering from an injury, in a foreign land that hates pirates. And if that's not bad enough, they have to face 2 enemies. Damn!