PEOPLE UPDATE TOO FASR I ALMOST MISSEF YOURS OH MY GAD THAD WAS SO HOT I LOVE YOU

Hot.hot.hot. need I say more?

I'm alive, yehoo.

What cracked me up was the Captain running behind Chester, he's obviously heavier in real life too. So the whole scene was only funnier, Chester also jumps around like a freaking rabbit all the time, the guy doesn't weigh a pound. And I lifted him once, he really doesn't. HAHA

Tryin to make a longer review here because my last ones sucked a bit, I hope you appreciate, I like your recent stories.

What the fuck damn, you could write there was going to be explicit, I went dry in a couple of minutes...

toooo much hottttness and lmao 77777?

Captain, you're a pig and we love you for it. Haha :-) What a hot blowjob. Are they new pirates at the end? This story is perfect for me :-)

God...my nosebleeding...the BJ is too hot! Chester was such a little tease lol and Mike really brought it. I feel pity on other crews because they didn't finish their dinner before they were forced to go out. Captain Mike was a bossy dick loooool.

So now...another pirate ship? Whose it would be? Why did they attack them? Awww I feel like living as a pirate is really tough.

By the way I wait for the night to read this story because it makes me have happy dreams, that's why I read later.. More concentration Lol

You have to stop that, first moment I'm trying to breathe and cannot, then you just make it all fade with more troubles! I need water. Though why does Chester always have to be such a tease? Bad Chester, stop playing with Captain Shinoda while he's talking, you know what it leads to. (yeah he's not even sorry about that Lool) They're lovely beyond words, the Captain is a snail against Chester, it was cute.. The blowjob thing just.. hurt my brain with porn I cannot.. Thank you so much for writing it. And at last, who are those pirates? Chester was planning on sleeping, rudeee.

Oh no! Becareful guys!

*in girlish high pitch voice* phi and Joe and brad are in this one. Love it. While the slash was hot, my favorite scene was when the 'played' shadows. Phoenix running into the mast was hilarious. I'm glad chester accepted Rob's apology. They all need one another

Awwww, Rob's response when Chester finally forgave him was the most heartwarming thing ever! I kinda suspect that maybe the crew planned that game just to get Rob and Chester back to normal. And I'm so glad it worked! I've been on team Rob the whole time, I really didn't think he did it on purpose. And him jumping into the water, then getting on his knees to ask Chester's forgiveness? I don't think he could've been more sincere if he tried. I think Chester will be able to move on more easily too, letting to of his grudge. And they all seem happy now, I'm hoping it stays that way for awhile. They deserve a break ahaha.

Haha "skip the slash"? Why would anyone want to do that? I swear, this story has some of the hottest slash on the whole planet. And their banter and bickering during sex makes it just 65384736473% hotter hahaha. Seriously amazing chapter all around, I love your stories so much! Update soon!

I'M IN A POOL OF DROOL

Awww, tears all around :P How cute. For a boat load of vicious pirates, they're just a bunch of big teddy bears! So I guess I forgive Rob... for now. We'll see. He better have been telling the truth. I think jumping overboard into the freezing cold ocean might have been a bit extreme for proving a point that you don't really believe in, so I think I believe everything he said.

That game sounds so fun (minus the kicking in the face, etc)! I love Phoenix in this story, he's such a smartarse. He kind of reminds of those teachers that you get that deliberately give you nightmare assignments or whatever just because they get a kick out of seeing you suffer and making you really work to show them what you can do. The sick man :P I still love him; him running into the mast made me laugh too.

As for skipping the slash....... why??? I can't write slash for shit, so I always find it interesting to read the scenes that people with actual talent write. I just don't know how you guys do it.

OK, so now I'm rambling. I've decided to postpone reviewing until I'm on the computer since my phone is such a bitch, and because it's much easier to type on a keyboard than a stupid auto-correct touch screen, I find myself rambling on and on... So great chapter as always. Looking forward to the next one :) <3

Good porn, I can't feel my brain anymore. You caught me off guard. I almost thought this story was done with sex but bam. I'm happy that I was wrong. The captain knows some role playing as a bastard, it was fun to read too. Nice ending of chapter as well.

Greetings

Chaz deserves love he thinks about cristopher like he killed him himself. sensitive for having a pirates heart

Sexy. :-) Hot. I was asking why they didn't have sex in long. But you asked yourself the same. I can't get enough of your story :-) Chester has a warm heart.

thats hot.. I need a paper bag to inhale lmao so hot.. I didn't expect hard sex it made me happy today xD

I felt much relaxed when I read Chester stated forgiveness to Rob. There was always something between Chester and Rob disturbing their owns. I hope the forgiveness would be an end of it. I really like the brotherhood those priates believed in. A family means too much: responsibility, protection, sharing, love and forgiveness. Chester was gradually understanding the meaning of these words. Like Mike said, he was becoming mature like a real pirate. I really like what Mike said to Chester "I'm proud of you" he said that not because of how strong Chester got or how skilled Chester was now. It's because Chester finally found himself and a family. That means a lot for a human being.

Suddenly I'm not laughing anymore. Would you excuse me while I go shower and possibly try to take care of my nasal period before I give a coherent review thank you

I didn't read yet but "Skip the slash" just got me HAAHAHAHAHA