What Can I say? Please update!! I find this story amazing and so different. I know just one or two reviews are poor but please don't leave me in this way. I really want to know how this couple find the happyness togheter. Please, I'll be here for you!!

It was such a nice read last night, I was going through the paragraph where Tyler went through those hard feelings and I was almost into his character, it was bitter but very realistic. I like the whole idea of Mike being there but Chester is slowly falling along with. Love it

Oh thank you for udate!!

I really really like this story, it's different and touching.

Here Mike is the mature adult, Chester is so desperate but drugs aren't the solution!

Is Tyler jealous? Poor kid, he feel Mike like a rival.

Amazing chapter, this story is more interesting.

Paula

Oh my gosh you updated! Please don't let us wait a couple more months for the next update. I miss this fic too much. On with the review- Mike is an ass in this chapter. Wth? He should be kissing the ground for having a friend like Chester. But then again, all good friends fight. Let's hope they'll continue to be one.

Beautiful chapter.

Mike is a bad father, a bad friend and a selfish man.

Poor Chester, wonderful father, he is suffering so much.

Where did Talinda? because she has left the house?

I can not wait to see more!

This story is very interesting!

Brava!

Chester is a pro at handling his kids. The kids love him. It was cute reading about otis bossing mike around. I felt sad when Chester waa dissapointed that Mike won't hold the twins. And what is thw story with talinda? Rated

Oh my God. How do you do this. I literally squeal like an idiot whenever I read the parts of the children, and thank you for such a long chapter! I got totally sucked in, and it was worth every minute of the read. I am so excited to know what happens next, and God, can I please just steal Otis away? Mike is a great character, and it intrigues me to see how you flare out his personality in the coming chapters. Great work! Keep it up.

Love,

Mary.

Great chapter! You're very good! Mike is a bad daddy, poor Otis! Ah the children ( Otis and Tyler) are so cute!!! Chester is an amazing dad! He can teach Mike So much.

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omg!! *hugs you* i think i saw this story somewhere once and it was another language! i never finished *cries* i cant wait for more!!

Lovely and amazing but overall I'm so impressed with your amazing writing! This chapter is so long which shows how much you're capable of using words on every phrase a different and better way. Too amazing! I adore Otis, he's so cute and when he "bosses" the father, hahaha Like his dad. I love how both guys handle the kids and have their intimate moments while they're around, they look like family! I hope the kids absorb this kind of education from them, especially from Mike. A good gentleman. The ending made me chuckle little, you're awesome Hahaha update soon!

Very interesting plot development. Apart from everything else that happens in the story, I simply die at the interactions of the children. So endearing. Great job. You're another one over here who has great descriptive power. Keep it up!

Your story is very interesting. It's well written and you portray your characters splendidly. Update soon!

Chester to the rescue! Haha. I am loving Anna. She's very creative, cunning yet she did it out of love. This is an amazing fic. Lookingg forward to the update. Rated

Mike needs a wake up call soon. Other reviewers tend to think along the same line. At times I do feel bad for him, but his attitude is a little too much. Brilliantly written, keep it up!

I almost feel like it's not Mike's fault at all, sometimes things just don't fit together as they should.. Amazing chapter!

I hope that this time with Chester will help Mike realise what's important. Something's gone wrong somewhere along the line and Mike's become really full of himself and out of touch with his own personal life. I feel for Anna, but I feel bad for Mike at the same time. It seems like he hasn't realised that he's become so distanced.

Mike ... is an asshole! He behaves very badly with Anna and Otis. It 'really strange to see him in this way. I hope that he best his behavior. Great work!

Poor Anna.Mike needs to learn to appreciate his family soon. Before he loses them for good. I laughed so hard when she cut off the electrical supply to Mike's office.

It's been a while since I've read something like this and you're really doing a wonderful job of it. I do hope you continue this to completion :)