I'm so glad I stopped by to read this! It's got that familiar Linkin Park feeling to it, and I feel so excited seeing something like this come up again on this site; it's been a long time since good stories floated around. Great job, and you are very talented. Don't second guess yourself. Please update, I look forward to reading more from you.

This is really very interesting, you're developing a nice and new ambience. It sounds very familiar

Okay, I really, REALLY like this so far! It's amazing to see a new story here, especially one written so well. Your translation was near flawless by the way, so please don't be afraid to translate and post more. I loved the way you set the scene in the studio, I could imagine they would be just like this in real life. Fire Phi and Hahn's Hell were hilarious by the way, they're so competitive haha, I love it.

I'm nervous about what may be happening between Chester and Talinda though... Seems maybe they're having problems, but Chester is always so sunny and positive about things, especially with his kids. I loved Tyler, Lily, and Lila in this, but especially Tyler. He's absolutely adorable! I laughed at his reaction to Joe touching his hair, like father like son indeed.

I understand Mike's aversion to kids in the studio, but still. He needs to chill out. I wish he'd look beyond that initial annoyance, and notice something isn't right with Chester. Well, hopefully he'll improve his attitude as the story progresses. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this, I can tell it could become one of my favorite fics on here. Hope you'll update soon! Rated 10, no question.

Great job! I like this first chapter, It's very interesting! Please update soon!

Firstly, the translation was wonderful. Awesome job there.

Secondly, I really like this so far. So many questions already. What's the go with Talinda, and Mike, dude. Chill. The kids are gorgeous and Chester's even more gorgeous with them. Him and his girls sleeping was just awww! Can't wait to read some more of this. Rated :)

nice story can we know more??

nice story can we know more??

Good start of persons in the story. We know more with next update? -pleas-

I love it. I wonder what is going on with Chester and Talinda. And I hope Chester will confide in his friends about his trouble, so that they could help him. I love how patience he was with his kids, it was beautiful to read. My favorite part was Fire Phi anfpd Hell Hahn, that was hilarious.

I already read it in german a few weeks ago, but I will read it again because I liked it so much :)

That was actually a very good translation, and the story itself is well done. I like the way Tyler is introduced here, it's a different character from the usual. Rated and can't wait for more :)