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Feels Like Falling by malaiyas

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From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-05-04

Chapter: ?

aw Mike is so like a love sick puppy *giggle* I enjoyed reading this, and I hope Mike doesn't get caught sneaking out cause that would suck XP

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2008-05-04

Chapter: ?

I liked that last chapter; my initial thought when finding out he was grounded though was mentally telling him to just go out anyway because it's Chester, then whadduya know. Anyhoo, great chapter, looking forward to the update, I'm actually pretty excited about how their evenings going to go.

From: Barush

Date: 2008-05-04

Chapter: ?

Wow, I'm actually nervous for Mike! lol On one hand I don't want him to get into trouble but then again hanging out with Chester *and* Brad... I'd love to read that=)) Well, can't wait for an update=)

From: astraloree

Date: 2008-05-04

Chapter: ?

ok...im like dying for more now, man!!! you must update soon!!!!I have a feeling that 'this is the start of a beautiful friendship' XD.....sneaking out of the house...now youve left us in killer suspense!!! love love love this story!!1

From: im.no.saviour

Date: 2008-05-03

Chapter: ?

ohmydear.


"I like to try to catch it early, kind of like cancer." mr. no-name went there! XDD


"Mike forced a smile for the sake of humouring the man" HOW IS THAT NOT FUNNY, MICHAEL?! YOU'REDUMBSHUTUP.


rob is still my favie. <3 mike better not be a douchey friend to him. i'll whoop his ass.


chester's cuuute. but don't tell anyone i said that. :x


i repeat:

"the butterflies in his stomach were enough to make him vomit." i was like, "omg, that'd be hilarious. :]"


"And on the walk home, he did just that." and then i was like, "OMGYES! XDDDD"


i like mike's mom, even if she is a joykill. the way she talks to mike reminds me of how my mom talks to me sometimes. ...i don't know if that's a good thing.


I liked his "if i hadn't gotten in trouble" bit. :]]


"he'd been sitting on his bed in the same position for four hours. His back was the first to alert him of that, followed by the clock" i feel you, mike, i feel you.


"here was silence on the other line for a moment, and Mike feared that he'd upset Chester.


"...So?" mmmmmmmmmmm. <3!


oh, michael, you're such a n00b.


i like how chester gave him step-by-step instructions on how to sneak out of his house.


more than willing?! UHOHMIKE.


GIMMEMOAR!! lmfao. but, uhhh, srsly. <33!!

From: im.no.saviour

Date: 2008-05-02

Chapter: ?

Again, I love your intro. Plz keyp dis theem, kthx. Okay, okay, my bad, I read the beginning of Chapter One again. -.-

Onto, uhh, Chapter Two. :]


Rob & Joe > Mike; ownd.


I kind of want to give Joe a hug, because I know how the kid feels. :/


"his mother's displeasure in his actions never failed to make him smile." why do I get the feeling you're speaking from personal experience? XD


GUSHERS! I haven't had those in years. ...Can I have some?


"so his laughter came out as a harsh bark." I lawl'd.


"It's not like a teacher's about to pick up the Gusher you threw at them, and throw it back at you." I disagree.


"Then what are you afraid of?" Can I see this question asked again later when Mike is being the bitch of the relationship and denying Chester secks and/or an actual relationship?


Rob = mood killer = my favourite.


Once again Rob > Mike; ownd. "I'm not trying to be a douche, sorry," <3!


I always thought it was stupid to give kids O.S.S. as a harsher punishment, because In-School & After-School detention are a lot less entertaining. Unless of course you're locked in a room with an attractive person. XD


swearing = suspension?! D:


I'm elated! <3! I'm curious as to what they're going to do as well. Mmm... post, plz? Ehehe. && dun mayk meh crii!! *angree glair hurr*

From: No~One

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Date: 2008-04-30

Chapter: ?

O.o Detention? What could happen there? lol Yeah, I'm being a perv but WHATEVER!


You're a really good writer. You need to update this. Like now. Please? pwety pwease?

From: Bennodalover

Email: {logged--out}

Date: 2008-04-30

Chapter: ?

WOW!


Your an awesome writer! I love this so far and I hope and pleading to get an update from you!


Chester= HOT! Mike= CUTE! Rob= Annoyingly cute! haha.


Update!

From: Hailey'stuff

Date: 2008-04-30

Chapter: ?

Aweesome updates! I love where this is going. I love the badass att. of Chester. PLEASE UPDATE!

From: smearedblackink

Date: 2008-04-30

Chapter: ?

Another good chapter. :) I'm reeeally excited to see where this is going. Is Brad showing up any time soon? 'Cause that'd make my life.


Anyway, keep it up! I love this so far.

From: suagr

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Date: 2008-04-29

Chapter: ?

awwww up to now, I really do love it, but if you're gonna make mike a bad guy, and let someone die in the end, I'll cry XDD

From: Barush

Date: 2008-04-29

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Aw, that was so cute=) I totally understand why Mike got so upset with Rob for teasing him, it just wasn't nice at all. And you've made me like Chester even more with this chapter. Keep up the great work, can't wait for an update!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-04-29

Chapter: ?

Detention for three days together, I'm really looking forward for this~ :D

Update soon, please~ <3

From: LP_babe

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Date: 2008-04-29

Chapter: ?

Another great chapter. I love the idea that it's Mike crushing after Chester rather then most fics it's Chester crushing after Mike but thats not the point =S. I love the little moment where they were both sitting at the Principle's office waiting to be called out haha. Chester is such a rebel haha. I love me the bad boys ^-^ and when Rob interupted their lil moment together, haha I love this Rob character. I seriously am looking forward to the next chappie.



Update soon<3

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2008-04-29

Chapter: ?

Love this so far, especially as it's Mike crushing on Chester, there's something about that I just love, other than it being the other way round.

From: astraloree

Date: 2008-04-28

Chapter: ?

Mikey with a crush is absolutely adorable!!!The bad boy Chester is awesome...I'd be crushing on him too! I was happy to see that you updated...I can't wait to see what happens! Detention for three days together...hmmm....could get hot!!!!Whoo hoo...can't wait for more!!!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-04-28

Chapter: ?

aw Mike is so in love XD it's so cute. I love reading this story :3

From: Sudercer

Date: 2008-04-25

Chapter: ?

:O! ALKGJALGJ <3


Okay, so that obviously didn't quite get my point across but I suck at these things.


I love this? :] Oh high school...It always makes for fun reading. Plus, you own.

From: No~One

Date: 2008-04-25

Chapter: ?

this really got my attention. please continue this. i wanna see what happens. =D

From: jaybee

Date: 2008-04-25

Chapter: ?

I totally enjoyed reading this fic. And i hope you continue to write it, i want to know what happens with Chester And Mike xxxxx

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