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Feels Like Falling by malaiyas

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From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-01-02

Chapter: 9

love this story plz continue it and update soonXD

From: Liar

Date: 2008-11-09

Chapter: 9

I love this story ^^ I realise Rob is looking out for his friend but gah, he's not doing it right! Poor Mike :(

Please update soon ^^

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-10-27

Chapter: 9

aww poor Mike! D: I feel so sorry for him right now

From: Barush

Date: 2008-10-27

Chapter: 8

I feel somehow entitled to feel sorry for Mike but then again it seems to me he's kinda overreacting lol Actually, the one I really do feel sorry for is Brad. Anyways, Bennoda progress, yay!=) Love the story, keep it up=)

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2008-10-27

Chapter: 8

wow Mike's more of a drama queen than I thought; Rob didn't really do much wrong (apart from maybe the diary bit) in that scene - and I keep questioning Chester's attitude, and how much he cares about Mike; like the bit that just happened with "he's always been weird" - didn't defend him much.

From: jaybee

Date: 2008-10-27

Chapter: 8

Yay an update you rock...Poor Mike Chester really needs to get his act together and Rob needs to stop being so over protective. Awesome update hope to see one soon.

From: Linkin_Carlin_71

Date: 2008-10-26

Chapter: 8

I'm loving this story. More please.

From: im.no.saviour

Date: 2008-09-06

Chapter: 8

Poor Michael, letting his excitement get the best of him and causing for embarrassment. XD

LMFAO at his mother chasing him! Oh, that is grand!

I feel for Michael - I almost got hit by a car the other day on the way to college. -.-

"The smell of popcorn was rich in the air; Mike noticed it the moment he stepped inside." EWEWEWEWEW. :x

Aaaaw, Chester's trying with the 'sryfag' thing. :]

"It gets dark out this early now?" How you know you've been spending too much time indoors, alone, without human contact.

"I've been admiring you from afar for years... I've always been looking for an excuse to talk to you. I... I love you!" He should've said that, but that may just be my desire to see him get the shit beat out of him. XD

"That's very... un-assholeish of you" <3

UGH. Now Mike had tainted Chester's image of Rob with his nonsense. Rob was just trying to look out for him and Mike goes and makes Rob seem like a gossip whore or something. FAIL, MICHAEL. >.<

'tried as discreetly as possible to watch as he lit up and took the first drag" CREEPER!

YAYAYAYBRADFORD!

Michael is retarded. Srsly, he's so angsty and whiny. *smacks him around a bit*

"I like it when Chester wears tank tops" I love Bradford. And it's still totally random and awesome.

OMG!!!! *EPIPHANY!* IS ROB ALL "DUN G0 NEER HIM!" BECAUSE HE AND CHESTER HAD A WHATEVER AND DOESN'T WANT MIKE TO GET HUUUURT?!?! :x

"He wanted to call him out, but at the same time, he didn't want to cause drama of any sort." LIAR! THAT IS ALL YOU DO! YOU DRAMA-LOVING / MAKING WHORE@!!!!

"he missed the mystery of not even knowing his name" wiiiiiiin.

Can I just slap Michael? PLEASE?!

"It's not like comparing fucking bracelets or some shit" <3!

Mike still got ownd by Chester's 'comfortability' speech.

The romance whore in me wants to be happy about the kiss, but I... I still have the urge to punch Michael. :x

Chester's reaction is the best thing ever! lkajsdlfkj Endless lawlz.

"Don't be so fucking dramatic," THANK YOU! GOD!

*PUSHES MICHAEL DOWN THE GRASSY HILL* because it's totally a hill in my head.

So. Yeah. Long awaited review ftw?

From: Authentic! myth.

Date: 2008-09-06

Chapter: 8

oooooh!! whats gonna happen next??

From: Authentic! myth.

Date: 2008-09-06

Chapter: 8

oooooh!! whats gonna happen next??

From: Sqwee

Date: 2008-09-01

Chapter: 8

wow, awesome chapter!

From: im.no.saviour

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

LJKSD:LKFJS YOU UPDATED!!!!!11!


I just wanted to be Review #100. >.>;


<3

From: shinobi

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

was so happy to see this on the front page again. i'm not quite coherant, what i really want to type is 'JHBNKL::OKILUHBNM<L:KP<>M' the translation would be that i adore this, the characters are so believable and easy to relate to and i like the mystery and the way each chapter has me guessing.

i really am looking forward to more <33

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

Wow what a great update, so many new things to add to the story; loved the Chester bisexuality part, because I was scared for a while he was going to be straight.


Oh and I loved the line "Chester doesn't like people... he just likes what's between their legs." - Can't wait for the next update for this fic, + it wasn't at all obvious to me that it was written during a writers block either, it was good stuff.

From: punkrocker

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

oh no! Chester's upset! I hope he figures it out and they *ahem* you know...


I was very excited to see this update, I thought this had been abandoned!!

From: Barush

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

Oooh, drama! Yay =) Finally some progress in their relationship though, I cannot wait how this will turn out! And the bit of Chester!angst... Loved it <33 Keep it up!=)

From: nodabear89

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

[That's very... un-assholeish of you]

Nice line there XD

But anyway, bout TIME Mike did something!!!

-danni

From: jaybee

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

If that amazing chapter was written with writers block i hate to imagine how fantastic it could have been. I loved it, it was so fantastic......Please don't leave it so long i am totally diggin your writters block lmao.

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-08-30

Chapter: 8

aww poor Chester and Mikey! *snugs them both* I enjoyed reading that :D

From: astraloree

Date: 2008-08-29

Chapter: 8

omg..omg..omg.. you cannot leave us hanging like this! I have been dying for this update! I'm freaking out over here! Please...please... give us more! I absolutely adore this fic and what a fabulous chapter...writer's block..pfft...that was greatness! i was so pissed when Braddles showed up and rained on the Mikey and Chester parade! And crying over Chester's rejection! What a fucking hoot! And A-fucking-men to Chester in a tank top! SO SMOKIN' even Braddles can see that! LOLZ

I have to admit I am still in the dark about how Chester feels about Mike though. I mean, it does make sense that if he was uncomfortable with his sexuality, he might not have opened up to Mike when he told him he was gay but he's so vague and aloof sometimes. Its always throwing me off! But your technique is working! I keep coming back for more! LoL..

Anyway I'm so into this story and can't wait for more. Please don't let it be so long before we hear from you although I know how life gets in the way! >:O Much love for you writing and sharing this epic bennoda loving! <333

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