Yay....I love this story! Thanks for the update. Now, I'm not sure what's going on with these two...sometimes i think Chester is flirting with Mike but others I'm not so sure. Poor Mike....unrequited love sucks...if thats the case anyway...we shall see. Also the fight with Rob left me thinking Chester does not have Mike's best interests at heart...saying he's not who Mike thinks he is and stuff which worries me a bit but during this chapter, Chester seems to guinuinely be interested in at least being friends with Mike what with the whole lying about the "pot" hmmm...you got me thinking and using my imagination! LOVE THAT!! Anyway..I'm rambling...love this story and can't wait for more!! <333

"Mike was, of course, still sour about the whole ordeal." kind of like, i don't know, sour MILK!?!?!

AHAHAHA HE HUNG UP ON HER!

ENGLISH ACCENT FTW! omg capslock, go away.

"there was nothing worse than uncertainty." for once, i agree with mike.

"Brad's a faggot!" was Chester's greeting for the night. LKJSDOIJWEKJDLKZJA

i think i'd smack someone if they fucked with me in the car the way chester does with brad. either that or be like, "GTFO!" [which definitely just reminded me of relapse, by the way.]

now i'm not sure how to feel about chester. :/ i mean, i already don't always like michael, but chester's starting to get to me, too.

"The sound of a leaf crunching" just one leaf. chester's like a cat!

"I have no one."

"It's depressing, when you put it like that,"

i laughed. :x

BRAD + "No, asshat! No comments from the peanut gallery!" = major <3.

wow, michael, wow. fuckin'... pfft. i kind of just want him to come clean with chester. be like, "I HAVE A BOY CRUSH ON YOU, SRY." but he won't, because mike's a dork. and i'd like some rob soontimes, pls. :]

it be almost 4 am and I got glued to reading this adorabletastic little story for hours. so this review, which I felt the need to type in a sudden flow of awe, will probably be the lamest ever, but it seems we'll have to deal with it for now. so.

om nom nom, mike's character here is definitely the sweetest ever. he's all bad and cool and everything as he hangs out with chester, but still he's really just a good nice kid. and also, I love the way you made up this little circle - how there's rob and mike as friends, and suddenly chester comes in and mike starts acting differently.

I'll be interested to find out more about chester and see how this already kinda intimate friendship between the two boys continue. yespls, moar. (:

I love this story. Argh. I love how Mike is slowly changing with out really realizing. And I seriously hope that Chester and Mike'll get together soonish eh=P. Please update!!

Angstangstangstangstangst...Mike is changing in a bad way. :S I really worry about Rob's parting shot though...Wasn't this supposed to be light-hearted? ^^'

It was funny.

Just a word of advice, you should probably slow down a bit.

Rob freakin' out and mike "changing" after one day, is a bit fast and a bit dramatic considering he hasn't.

Take your time, develop shit.

Update soon

-Bitty-

Screamed "Yes!" like a school girl when I saw you had posted an update! I do feel a tad bit sorry for rob but am wanting some bad boy teen bennoda so badly I can hardly focus on that! You definitely have me curious about what rob knows....that mike doesn't....*bites fingers nervously* The note passing was classic! left me chuckling...and then of course getting caught. Can't wait for more!!! Whoo hoo...mucho <333

poor Rob... i bet he's right .... too much chester can be bad lol ...update soon ^_^

Love it!!!! I'll be waiting...

Aw, bad!Chester, yay!=)) I'm starting to like this story more and more, just still waiting for some Bennoda haha Anyways, keep it up and update as soon as possible, can't wait!=)

So Rob obviously knows something about Chester that Mike doesn't. Ugh, kinda just want him to go away, even though he's Mike's friend and all; I just want Mike to be bad with Chester.

I think it's quite realistic how you've got Mike acting here towards Rob by the way; it's completely the way I could see that happening when Mike has such a thing about Chester.

Looking forward to the next update.

YAY AN UPDATE. :D

Hooray for passing notes in detention! Although, if the teacher supervising detention at my old high school caught me passing notes, I'd probably get backhanded...

My phone ALWAYS goes off during class/detention/when I really don't want it to. Poor Mike. Good thing he didn't get caught.

Um, how much do I love Rob in this? Somuchsomuch. Mike's an asshat for treating him that way. *pets Rob*

Well, you know how much I love this. *eagerly awaits your next update!*

omg so sad! D: I can't believe that Rob and Mike aren't friends anymore! *cries*..anyways I liked reading this chapter, it was good, I can't wait to read the next part :D

"The big, bold letters plastered on the door meant business." YEAYEAYEA!

"so he decided he didn't care" now, who's logic does that remind me of? XD

MIKEYOUCREEP! <3

omg. ohhhh, chester. brill.

NOTESNOTESYAY!

"You're an asshole," huh. someone JUST said that to me. 0:]

AHAHA MIKE AGAIN! he's such a geek! checking his shoes, yeah, okay.

i'm officially casting myself as a member of TEAM ROB. is that alright?

emo!mike! yay! when does he start crying? XD

so, uhh, what's going on next? what do you have planned?! WHAT DOES ROB KNOW?!

youbluffed. <3

every time you update it's a treat ^_^

This is definatly really interesting.

I love how Chesters the badass and Mike's all innocent 'n kinda tries to be a lil rebel.

Lol.

Wow.

Update soon

-Bitty-

aww poor Mikey, he's getting a little rebellious eh? XD I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot. Wonderful job :3

yay!!!! *does a happy dance* I love love love this story...so glad you updated!!!Can't wait for more!!!Please continue.....I can hardly wait!!!! Mucho <333 for you and this fic!!!!

I'm so happy you updated!=) Seems like Chester is starting to have a bad influence on Mike, hm. Not that that I don't like it or anything, just feel a bit sorry for Rob=) The scene outside on the grass was really sweet=) Anyways, update soon, can't wait to read another chapter=)