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The Bump by Kirstie

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From: wz

Date: 2014-06-26

Chapter: 3

I am in love with this one. So much.

From: chazzy kid

Date: 2008-06-02

Chapter: 3

That was so cute!!!<333 I love this fic!! I liked the part where Chester and Oscer were bonding!! That ws so cute!!!



I love mpreg, but I mainly love heterpreg.

From: chazzy kid

Date: 2008-03-24

Chapter: 3

awww!! that was so cute!! I can so imagene Chester and Mike having a kid together!!

From:

Date: 2007-12-17

Chapter: 3

I will kill myself if I don't review this, lol. Love love love love this story to death. Romance, drama, a lil bit angst, humor and full of love. I love love love your writing in this story (and other stories too, ha). I don't even think that I will ever read another beautiful MPREG like this again. Thank you so much for writing this. Kirstie = the best.

From: Anstice

Date: 2007-12-13

Chapter: 3

That was freaking amazing, and really effing funny :P Great job!

From: shinobi

Date: 2007-12-12

Chapter: 3

sometimes all i want to read is a nice bit of fluff and this is a really sweet fic which more than satisfies my greedy needs (: it's refreshing to see something not so dramatic (although this chapter was pretty dramatic on the contary - you made the pregnancy seem very realistic and the weeks following the birth with mike and chester's emotions all over the place was very convincing too)

i feel all smiley having read this through all over again =D

From: swsrd

Date: 2007-12-11

Chapter: 3

OMG…Finally you update and finish this story~~~~~WoW

It’s fucking so amazing and cute like always before. And Chester gave birth the little Oscar[man, the boy’s name is also lovely^^] in natural labor?? Ooooo HOTHOTHOT….These two men were blessed and so were the whole family!! I think Chaz was very adorable when he said to Rob: “Don’t drop him. And if people look at him and say he’s cute – don’t tell them he’s yours. And don’t let them touch him.” Anyway, I should congratulate them on having their baby and oh I even could imagine the scene that the three of them playing together… GOD, how much I love it~~~~Well, Mike, take care of your two favorite boys and Chaz, wish you could be happy forever not only in the fic world but also in the real world with your love by your side.

Awesome job~~~Thank you!!!****KISSES****

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2007-12-11

Chapter: 1

OMG,you updated this!

Ohhhhhhh,I couldn't explain how much I love it, it's so fucking great and fantanstic! Their lovely boy was given birth finally, congratulations to Chaz and Mike, they are two just so amazing fathers!


Thank you for this.=D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2007-12-11

Chapter: 1

omg! I couldn't believe it when I saw that you updated! That was SOOOOOOO CUTE! :D

From: nodabear89

Date: 2007-12-10

Chapter: 1

[He pouted and tried to roll away but Mike wouldn’t let him.


“Wouldn’t it be funny if he turned out to be a girl?” Chester spoke lightly.


“No.” Mike answered quickly with an inward groan at the thought.


“Steal him and bring him here.”


“I’m not stealing your baby!” Rob exclaimed.


a harassed looking nursed handed the baby to Chester.


“Kinda like me? After what I’ve just done your mouth should be a permanent suction on my cock!”]



BEST FUCKING LINES EVER!! Made me giggle through out the story. I love Ozzy and Chester, being so protective over him. And Mike for being so protective over Chazzy XD XD XD too effin cute!! i'm faving this!

-danni

From: Shinoda Bennington

Date: 2007-12-10

Chapter: 1

Oh my god, you're alive which is very good but you update this story. Makes me so happy.

From: Gummibear Queen

Date: 2007-12-10

Chapter: 1

My favourite part:


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“You should ask them how long it should be before we can have sex.” Chester said and Mike glanced up to catch the nurse closest to them smirk.


“I will, not on the top of my list of priorities though.”


“Well it’s one of mine – I mean presumably if you go on top and aren’t pushing my tummy its’ fine straight away.”


“I don’t think you’ll be feeling up to that for a little while Chester.” A nurse peeked over and smiled down at him. “Nor will you have the time.”


“Oh it doesn’t take long.” Chester said and Mike froze, his face burning up as the nurse and several others giggled.


“Is that just oxygen?” Mike asked.


****


very funny and adorably cute story.

From: SteppinRazor

Date: 2007-12-10

Chapter: 1

The only concrit I can contribute is that the word "bowl" should not contain an "e". Sorry, but that was a bit distracting as I'm a little obsessive about spelling. I don't usually read mpreg so the fact that I thought this was SO sweet... is a super compliment to you! Great writing!

From: EmBeR

Date: 2007-12-10

Chapter: 1

awww, i loved this very much!

From: swsrd

Date: 2007-11-26

Chapter: 1

most cutest article that I've ever read..

Plz finish it..I beg you too..from the bottom of my heart

Plz update once you get the spare time and the proper feeling. You know we never forget this and we are always here wait for you..THX

From: Shinoda Bennington

Date: 2007-10-01

Chapter: 1

Please finish the story. I'm begging you

From:

Date: 2007-03-15

Chapter: 1

Seems like you won't update... *cries* Please please please, just one more chapter and I will never annoy you again. Please... I can do anything for just one more chapter, even a short chapter is okay... Please....

From: DeMoNiC_aNGeL

Date: 2006-08-31

Chapter: 1

You may do more chapter? I really hope you do. That way we'll all know how their baby turns out and how much it affects their relationship, etc.


I really love to read about Mike/Chester pregnancies. They're so adorable.

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2006-08-31

Chapter: 1

This is like dreamland for me right now, I had no idea you were ganna do another chapter; I am a major sucker for fluff, espically involving Mike and Chester. Great chapter, loved the over emotional Chester and Mike's attitude towards him, that was great. I'd love to read another part after this.

From: Kenji_Angel

Date: 2006-08-31

Chapter: 1

Oh my god, so bloody cute! I love how Chester is so over-emotional and sensitive, and Mike is the typical over-protective father to be. I love the fluffyness and the little bit of angst, to.

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