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Broken Bones by shinobi

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From: liberating.labia

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

Oh. My. God.


I was not expecting that... I didn't see that coming... Well, I did, but... NO! Poor Mike.


{is shocked I even said that}

It was lovely. every single chapter. i loved it. Can't wait for the sequal. ^-^

From: BubbleSquat

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

Oh ye, here *hands you cupcakes*

From: BubbleSquat

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

I'm in way too much shock to cry. Wow... that was. um, wow! that was so great! ok now im crying! can't wait for the sequel :-)

From: Nique

Email: Lpfan887@yahoo.com

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

*stares at you blankly* i am speechless. That last part was so beautiful, in the midst of all the pain Mike saw Chester as he was meant to be seen. And a sequal would be great.

From: Enigmatic (too lazy to log in)

Email:

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

Well, the tears are finally drying and my face is blotchy, but I'll try to write a review.


This story is magnificent. There is just something about Mike angst that is so wonderful and yet so tragic at the same time. You write it perfectly, and this story is going to stay on my favorites for a long time to come.


Since I'm still in denial that Mike is dead (I'm just grasping at straws) I really look forward to reading a sequel. Keep up the awesome writing ^_^

From: Dolores

Email:

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

you definitely have to write a sequel in which Mike, I hope, will be ok. His last thoughts made me almost cry, I almost had tears im my eyes. Actually,the whole last part was sad,when he thought about Chester as an angel,really beautiful. I hope we won't have to wait for the seqeul very long.

From: mest_up1

Email:

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

*tears*.... awsome... i'm in awed! really this is a beautiful ending... i'll read the sequel for sure.... i can,t wait for you to post it.... let me know when you'll do that... i don't wanna miss it :) c-ya soon... i hope

From: Pili

Email:

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

*cries* I love this chapter, it´s sad, terrible but still amazing and great..wow. I have no words now. Only..poor Mike. It´s not fair he´s gonna die, it´s not fair all he has lived to die..and same my poor Chazzy. They´d deserve something good..tell me, you´re gonna do an awesome sequel, with they´ll be fighting together against their nightmares. Anyway, amazing fic. Congrats.

From: 3v1L 3Lm0

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

*bawls* *bawls some more* Damn you, woman! I'm so crying right now! Gah!


Sequel, eh? Is Mike and Chazzy gonna live?! Or is they gonna die?! Ahh! If they die, I'll be sad.. but it's still an awesome ending!

From: lp lover

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

omg!

that was so sad!I feel like crying.

Why did you kill Mike?

I'd love to see a sequel.

From: SilentPainKillers

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

O_O


That was amazing.

From: Easier2Run

Email:

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

Of course we want a sequel! =)

Great chapter, come on write that sequel and give us more angst! ;)

From: I have no pen name

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

*cries* Mike died, But Chester's gonna be sad now. OMG your writing is purely genius, but now i must go off 2 cry and kill evil Dave GRR ><!

You have to do a sequel so I can find out how everyone is about Mike and then what happens to Dave, I NEED TO KNOW!!!!

From: mu5icBtcH

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

great finish, but will a sequel be possible without Mike? but i'm sure if that's what you're gonna do, it'll be just as good. i look forward to it

From: a.rob

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

oh, wow...shocking, but good. :)

From: hayley c

Email: mwcoops@ntlworld.com

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

I will read the next 1!! please e-mail me wen its started and with what its called!

wow! that was a really great story! ive been following it 4 ages now and i love it! ooooh, whats happened! hes dead! what will be in the second? yay! cant wait 4 it!


thanx so much 4 this story! and good luck with the next!!

From: Koinu

Email: animeprincessVK@aol.com

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

*tears streaming down face* oh my god...... I HATE DAVE!! he is soooo evil!!!! *in the story at least* oh shit, this story is..is..so good. my god, mike!!!! and yes, i would love to read the sequal. *whimper* i'll be sad all day now!!!

From: Kenji_Angel

Email: jules69_69@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

Oh my god, you've left me speechless. Every chapter I'v read has left me speechless. The ending was unexpected, but beautiful none the less.


I cant wait for the sequel.

From: babelicious

Email:

Date: 2004-06-21

Chapter: 25

You are evil for leaving it there. Halfway through reading this I felt like getting a baseball bat and paying Phoenix a visit.


The love that Mike and Chester had for each other really shone through the whole of the way and yes, I would love to read a sequel.

From: lp lover

Date: 2004-06-19

Chapter: 25

omg!

THIS IS SO BRILLIANT!

I almost want to kill you for doing the cliffy!

PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

UPDATE SOON!

PLEASE!

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