Ok... that.....was Hot poor puppy 8D

that... was... hmm... i cant say it was hot without feeling disgusted, and i can't say it was bad without lying... so... take this as a compliment! you've left me speechless! :D

I don't have words for that. I know you said if you didn't like grotesque stuff then don't read it, but I had to see for myself. I'm sorry I did read it. Animal cruelty is disgusting.

But the slashy scenes are great ;)

GOD, THAT'S FUCKING TWISTED, MAN...

But it was good, but in an amazingly twisted way. Damn...

Hathor...

oh I LOVED IT!

Awesome Ivy. And like *everyone* said - fuck 'em. It was sick, it was twisted, and it was fucking great. Perfect.

- .kate-ster

i liked it too. but it still was kinda sick. but i liked it. so im a sick person. bah oh well. good story

Wow... That0was morbid. It was awesome!

holy fucked up fuckin shit!!

that was...........fucking....odd....

but like u said in ur A/N its JUST a story, and i personally completely understand that you wanted to try sumin new...granted this was a pretty fucked up way to do it..and THANK GOD its ONLY a story!! i loooooooooove animals *grin* teehee

lol

well this story was great, aside from the fact it was pretty fucked up..it was still pretty good as well..wat a fuckin odd combination

~Bitty~

hey, i really love your story, its diferent and you described the pain pretty well, but be honest: mike doing that? c`mon, he wouldn`t ever kill a fly, but its a very good and diferent story

That was... what everyone else had said...sick. Although it did make a good story. It was certainly different.

oh my god.

you are a sick sick person.

even beyond that.

I mean...ugh!>< that was ugly.really.

THAT WAS WEIRD!! I dont cxare! I totally get your point in your point of view. HEHE!!

Dude, you have serious issues...

Mike... *shakes head* Of all people...

That was like... beyond sick. That's probably why I liked it so much.

Don't get me wrong - I'm not into killing dogs either but... I like sick and twisted stuff, I guess. I like the shock it gives me.

Anyway it's sick. Meant as a compliment. ;)

AHHHHHHHHHH HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THAT POOR LITTLE PUPPY?!?!?! man, that´s a good and interesting story, i really like it, but poor puppy, i felt bad for it, so good that it wasnt a kitten or i would kill mike right now, i love kitties, well, anyway thats a good story

omg that poor puppy!*gasp* thatz like animal cruelty!! arrrgh....gud sex scenez tho:P

Well, Holy fuckin shit. Um...wow. God, I actually LIKED that!!! Now I'm worried about myself. It kinda reminded be of "The One-Eyed Cat" (By Poe), because he killed the puppy for reasons that most people would love a pet. Great fic! (Keyword, F-I-C-T-I-O-N!!!) The lube thing was demented. :)

ew! poor puppy :( nice story but i LOVE puppies

:(:(:(:(:(:(

-im a dork and proud-

I actually liked it. Reminded me of Poe's Tell-Tale Heart for some odd reason. Do you think people pulled him aside in the streets and said "you had a guy kill an old man? You sick fuck!" No, I doubt it, because it was a story. I don't agree that people shouldn't be allowed to flame though. They have as much right to speak their mind as someone who wants to complement, but at the same time...why waste your time telling someone you hate something? Whatever. Brava for having the balls to write something like that!!

That was disturbingly sick and wonderful. Heh. Maybe he'd buy him a new puppy... great line to end it with. The murder of the dog was enough to make this story completely out of the ordinary and amusing, but the fact that they used the blood as lube, that made it classic. Sick minds write the best stories. -Nev