Beautifully written. I don't usually like stories with minimal dialog, but this is a wonderful exception.

Oh that was beautiful. I cried so many times. Your writing is amazing! *favs*

fucking amazing

Oh. My. God. That was one of the most graceful and beautiful things that I've ever read. It made me cry. Wow..I'm just amazed.

holy shit. that has got to be one of the most beautiful things i have ever read in my life.

This is such a beautiful story

I don't know what to say to express how wonderfully writen it is

Oh my God, this is the most AMAZING BEAUTIFL love story EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my goodness....gees I want to find love like that...Really from the bottem of my heart this is a beautiful story, really.......I'd love to have a copy of it..........Think you could email me one.....???? I'd love you forever.......

Oh, I remember that fic! I read it in your journal a looooooong time ago and already loved it back then. And I think I know what I'm gonna do during the next hour... read it again!

I'm running out of good things to say. Really I am.

Just...

...please update soon...

i was looking at the review and nobody has express how beautifully sad and emotional this story is than Conzie. I agree with everything she wrote. your story is poetry, every verse taking us deeper and deeper into emotions that bring us to tears but at the same time hope for the light.

I've left a review about everywhere. Here, and your LJ, I'm Conzie on LJ by the way) but I didn't get to review the last chapter, and even though this isn't the last chapter in the story, I'm going to leave you with my review.

I have a wicked weakness for Chester angst. But who wouldn't? Amazingly written Chester angst is terribly hard to find, and a tough thing to conquer in writing fiction. But you did, with such definite skill and a breathtaking ease.

I loved the tenderness undertone of the story, it kept me calm, but it was enough to have me on the edge of my seat, dying to know what was going to happen next.

True beauty. That's what this story is, simply true. The angst from both Chester and Brad, the painful remembrance on Chester's part. Beautifully horrific at the same time, myself not only shedding tears for the beauty, but for the sadness as well.

Flawless description. I give you major praise for that one, keeping the quiet tone of sadness, along with the astounding beauty, the description was just perfect. I knew exactly what emotions the scenes called for, and that's essential in good writing.

God, I still have tears in my eyes. You have true talent, one of the few writers who can still bring tears to my eyes with just a simple words at the end of a chapter. It's the stories like this that inspire me to write and explore things beyond my options.

So, I thank you, for having talent, and producing this stunning piece of fiction.

Keep up your excellent writing, and I hope maybe to be able to talk to you in the distant future. :)

*mad love and mad hugs*

Sarah

uuuuuuuuuuummmggggrrrraaaaaaooooooo......*has no words*

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE

From the reviews I've read, there's not much I can say that hasn't already been said....

Your writing is too beautiful, too captivating, too perfect to really describe. You have an absolutely immaculate way with words. This story was so moving, and touching.

Please, don't stop writing. You're SO gifted, it would be such a loss to all of us if you did. In short...

this.

is.

beautiful.

::drys her eyes::

Ahem. One place to comment is never good enough and you my friend are no where to be found.. so I leave you with this and you left me with a lovely story.

From the very first chaper I was drawn in, it's funny to me how a simple suggestion of Chester angst lead to something so beautiful in writing. I don't know where you came with the idea and how you managed to smooth each chapter as you did but it works very well.

I've read the whole thing but then again I like to re read things all the time, and you know each time I do I get such a sense of being in the story. It's like even though its fiction.. you can feel everything chester is feeling and thats always an amazing thing for a reader. One of the things that always captivates me or allows me to love a writer is if you can read it and feel it.

You pictured him as beautifully tragic, and Brads role in the story is so gentle and kind.. because I would imagine not to many people could deal with that sort of behavior from another.. the love is touching, its there but its a genuine form of it.. not the cliche "oh I love you" stuff you tend to see over and over. You balance it out and have kept this story realisitc and I love that about your writing.

Your a blessed writer and I know you know that already but never hurts to say it once more. Thank you for the lovely story as it is already on my top 5 list, and you are a terrfici friend and writer and I feel lucky as a reader to have the opportunity to see your work before I have to go to a bookstore and purchase it :P

*huggles tight*

This is so beautifully written. And very realistic. Ok, it made me cry. WONDERFUL. More. Please?

I've been reviewing on your journal, so I guess you already know how I feel about this story. Just in case you don't (yeah right !!!), I think this story is the definition of perfection.

I've lost count of the number of times I've read it and it still gets me every time

"And I wonder if he is sleeping with ghosts as well."

That line was perfect. I can't even express......

This is such a fantastic story.

Update Soon!

I said it once, and I'll say it again, (ooh, that was all 30 Seconds to Mars-ish!) You are so talented, and I am like so intrigued by your style, because it is just so beautiful.....

*hugs and hands u muffins*

Update.....:DDDDDDDDDD

you are seriously so talented! this story is just beautifully written, every single chapter really does just get better & better.

all i can ever say is AAAAWWWWW......