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Asphyxia by hybridgurl

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From: *Princess*Of*Darkness*

Date: 2010-02-26

Chapter: 1

Poor Chazy! = [

I loved it! but how sad!

From: lplover22

Date: 2008-06-18

Chapter: 1

I saw it with Chaz as the storyteller and Mike as the other guy. It seemed to fit that way without you using any names. (But then again I read a lot of Chester/Mike, so...) Great story!

From: SHaMeLeSSLY

Date: 2008-05-02

Chapter: 1

Ok, for me it was Chaz and Mike, Chaz being the storyteller and Mike being the heartless bastard!


Of course, for me it's always M/C so I'm probably not the best person to ask lol!


I could really see Chazzy sitting there in tears at a meet & greet, and Mike being the one to comfort him. Love the dark undertones of that 'comfort'.


God I love Heartless Mike :)

From: 3v1L 3Lm0

Date: 2005-03-06

Chapter: 1

For me, Dave was the storyteller. I have no idea why, lol, but he just seems like the perfect person for the part. And of course Mike was the other one, cuz who else has a smile plastered to their face all the time? There's even a name for it! Shinoda!Grin. Yesh. I will go now. I heart this story.

From: KC

Email:

Date: 2004-02-16

Chapter: 1

aww. sad. yet well-written and not cliche teenage angst garbage either. i can relate to the general idea of this fic, in some abstract way...


so yes, good job. and i also thought of it in chester's point of view. =)

From:

Date: 2004-02-09

Chapter: 1

It was also Chester/Mike for me. Mike being the storyteller.


I love your writing Amy, because you usually have no names, just faces and emotions. I love that about your style.


This broke my heart and wow...you have such talent it is unreal.


I hope this is on your journal, cause I want to leave you a better review there.


Great job. I really loved this.

From: cruel_world

Email:

Date: 2004-02-09

Chapter: 1

Brilliant stuff! I found it really emotional.I also imagined the characters to be exactly who you wrote about!

From: the Sinner

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

that was wonderful.. i think i'm probably the first person to say this, but this was most DEFINITELY phi phi talking. maybe i'm under phoenix's influence because today's his birthday, but i think the person he was talking to was... brad?

although it wouldn't make sense because phi's also married. oh well.. i liked that a lot. beautifully written.. i hope your writer's block goes away.

:)

From: Kasai

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

::sniffle:; Hun, that was so so sad.. Gosh, I just about started crying.. :(


But still, you did an excellent job! Truly wonderful! Great job!

From: crazyscaryfreak

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

hmmm, i saw it as chester and mike too, but the other way around...strange! we must think almost alike! v. good for me to read, considering i've just broken up with my boyfriend....good job! :D

From: BubbleSquat

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

for me i saw mike and chaz, but the opposite way around....... nice stuff. good ending. u get cupcake.

From: Francessca

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

when i read it i thought of mike + joe. =) lol anyway chester + mike is okay by me too =D

From: MissLPuk

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

wow, i really like it, it was so well written :) good job! xxx

From: Lauren

Email:

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

Well done. That was beautifully written. I thought it'd be Mike and Chaz but I was first thinking Rob and Mike until you mentioned Rob...soo I dunno

From: Aye Maytee

Email: creamdspinach@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-02-08

Chapter: 1

Aha. That's ironic. For me it was Mike and Chester as well, but it was Mike who was telling the story. ;) Enjoyed it all the same. Love it.

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