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From: redsky

Date: 2004-06-30

Chapter: 8

This story is really great! I hope you'll update soon. Would be a real shame to abandon this wonderful piece of fiction^^

From: ChazyChazBenito

Date: 2004-06-12

Chapter: 8

Wow, I just started reading this fic because the description sounded interesting. I'm so glad I decided to read it! You really captured the emotions of such a turbulent time in history so well. I really want to see this updated. But it's been about four months, so I don't know if that's gonna happen. But I'm favoriting this and I hope that you will eventually update. You have to! Brad and Mike have to meet! hehe


Laterz,

Heather :)

From: rebelkittie

Date: 2004-02-16

Chapter: 8

Definitely am enjoying the story thus far and hope that it will continue to progress as well as it has been.

From: Emerald Amber

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Date: 2004-02-15

Chapter: 8

Yes, it was short, but at least they( Mike & Brad) seem to be getting closer to meet! And I can't wait too long to their meeting! Brad is preparing himself to this evil guy... While Mike is utterly fragile right now...(I hated this Chester! He is weak!Letting his friend this down...)

But tell us what your teacher said about it? I'm curious...

Em.A.

From: Akira'sBliss (On vacation from the 14th - 19th)

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Date: 2004-02-15

Chapter: 8

It's Lauren


Another awesome chapter. This story is progressing very nicely. I can't wait for more

From: xxxxxx

Date: 2004-02-15

Chapter: 8

This is like..wow...*speechless*. You've done a superb job so far..and I'm kicking myself for not reading it earlier. I really hope you continue soon.

From: Ceej

Date: 2004-02-06

Chapter: 7

This is really good. lol I don't know why but I found Brad asking his Aunt to pass the fucking water hilarious! *ahem* Excellent stuff, please update!

From: Lauren

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Date: 2004-02-01

Chapter: 7

I loved that chappy. I love this story. Please update soon.

From: Melancholy

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Date: 2004-02-01

Chapter: 7

hey bubz! i love your story and stop ayin ur chaps r crap! u know they r excellent, fabukous, captivating and hav the correct historical info everytime:D oki well keep updatin!! LUV JJ

From: Oz LP fan

Date: 2004-02-01

Chapter: 7

aww poor mike n brad :(! i love this please update!

From: Melancholy

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Date: 2004-01-22

Chapter: 5

omg.....im in love..hurry hurry! another chapter!

From: Lauren

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Date: 2004-01-22

Chapter: 5

I love this story. Please add more soon please

From: Such Illusion

Email: great_grooves@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-01-22

Chapter: 5

this is a highly creative story and must have came out of a very smart and brilliant mind.

*gives you a cocnut candy cuz it's Chinese new year!*

have a good year ya'll *grins*

Phoebe.

From: Ceej

Date: 2004-01-22

Chapter: 5

Man this is amazing as ever sub! You have to keep going because I just wanna see how they interact, I mean like whether they'll share their experiences and realised how much they in common or whether they'll like keep quiet.

Ack I don't think that made sense but juss go on! Ah this is so good

From: Emerald Amber

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Date: 2004-01-21

Chapter: 5

Bravo! A shower of white petals on you!


This last line translate so well how little people mean to the War Lords: "Is my life spent in a camp going to do any good to either Roosevelt or Hitler?"


Once again, in a short chapter, you can put so much emotion, picture so well the horrors of a time that the humans are beggining to forget and so, falling into temptation to repeat it.


I love how Mike's frustration is taking the best of him! Brad has seem too much terror, it is understandable that he feels afraid ad petrified.

Em.A.

(waiting for more...)

From: Oz LP fan

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Date: 2004-01-21

Chapter: 5

yes esaba i love this story! uso have 2 update!!!!!!!

From: Rock Goddess

Email: rock_goddess64@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-01-20

Chapter: 2

This story is just painful. I studied the whole WW2/Hitler issue all last year and Im very interested in it, and when you put Mike and Brad into it I find myself addicted. Yes, Im addicted.

That means you must write more of this wonder.

It's a brilliant fic. Keep it up ;)

From: Ceej

Date: 2004-01-13

Chapter: 2

Aw good luck! ^.^ This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to see what happens.. And jeez silly Brad and his wanting to shout at Mike *uh hello?* you're int he same situation!

*ahem* Keep writing tis awesome!

From: Oz LP fan

Date: 2004-01-13

Chapter: 2

no babe that is ok, msn is a fuck! dont cry coz that is my idea! dont worry bout it! ok!

From: Oz LP fan

Date: 2004-01-13

Chapter: 2

im adding this 2 my fav stories! i love this story it is awesome! please update!

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