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From: Mikey boy

Date: 2014-02-23

Chapter: 24

Okay, I must say this. I've read this story over and over again, and I just love it. ENDLESSLY LOVE IT. That is all! So congrats, first of all for writing such an awesome story, and second of all, don't wait too much to update a part two, or else I'm gonna die!! Okay, nearly. Keep it up, you have all my support on this. Can't wait for Addicted 2!! <3<3<3

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-01-15

Chapter: 24

Just got caught up on this story, and wow. Awesome job on the last few chapters! You portray the tension between Mike, Anna, and Rob so well, and it makes the whole thing much more believable.


The dialogue is great and always interesting. It was really cute when Rob cooked dinner for Anna, and they talked about Rob's past. And the talk with Mike before the band left almost made me tear up. I love Anna with Rob, they are so cute and innocent, but her and Mike have so much chemistry and such strong feelings...I don't want either of them to be hurt, but I don't think that's possible.


Anyways, love this story, can't wait for part two!

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-01-11

Chapter: 24

*tears*


Mike... wow. Firstly he is so damn hot he made my eyes burn in this chapter. But then, just wow. So much emotion from him! It became really obvious in this chapter how deep his feelings for Anna are, but how conflicted he is because of the close relationship he has with Rob, and same for Anna.


I'm afraid I still don't see Rob and Anna making it; not with the chemistry she shares with Mike, and that kind of annoys me about her. She's getting in further and further with him, and it's going to be all the more devastating for Rob when he does find out because she's let it carry on for so long. She should've ended it with Rob ages ago. But then what would I be reading right now, huh? :P


Having just said that Anna annoys me, I do feel bad for her. Those goodbyes were sad, and it must be hard for her to watch the people closest to her all leave without her.


Anyway, I loved this chapter, I don't think you need to be concerned about any of it. I'm sad it was the last one, but I'll be looking out for Altered updates, and definitely hanging out for part 2 :)

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-01-11

Chapter: 24

Ohh steamy indeed ;) haha I figured Mike couldn't leave without saying goodbye to Anna xD I know her and Rob are happy, but her and Mike have such a chemistry. It's amazing and I can't wait for the next part! "Jim Carrey 'I hate goodbyes'" hahaha xD

From: nab

Date: 2014-01-11

Chapter: 24

Interesting story. Kinda sad for rob (he is my favorite LP member) since he's pining for a girl that's in love with another. I love the dialog cause it's sounds believable. Can't wait to read more of your work.

From: Samy

Date: 2014-01-11

Chapter: 24

Okay so I just finished reading these last chapters and I just wanted to say that I think it would help if you don't focus so much on detail and a little more on the dialogue, like between Anna and rob for example, from know on I think their conversations should be a little more interesting, idk. And I really liked that message mike sent Anna because I'm

assuming that's true, like I don't think rob and Anna are really getting anywhere and I see them as friends :3 well I like this story and I can't wait to see where it's going , I really hope mike gets clean and Anna makes up with sam!! :))

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-01-11

Chapter: 23

I'm so sorry, I didn't even see the last update!! Only 1 chapter to go?! Waaah. At least they'll be a part 2 though :D


Aww, I'm glad Rob has loosened up a bit now and seems a lot more outgoing. They're still so cute. I'm curious about how the tour will go and how Anna will cope left behind without them.

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-01-10

Chapter: 23

:O I didn't even see the update for 22!! Ahh I had to catch up! Seriously Rob and Anna are the cutest couple ever xD and one more chapter?! But at least there will be more xD I love this story so much!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-01-09

Chapter: 21

Mikey's doing this to you cause you know its true. I'm sure Sam & Chester's going to do great.

From: Mikeyy shinizzle

Date: 2014-01-09

Chapter: 21

Anna why don't you just go for it with Mike... Omg this chap just amazin' :) can't wait for more!!!

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-01-09

Chapter: 21

Aww Sam and Ches <3 but I wish Anna was a bit lighter on Sam :( the girl must be terrified but she will have Chester and the band and hopefully Anna. I'm enjoying this little game Mike is playing with Anna. I just really can't wait to see who she ends up with at the end because I don't even know! Awesome chapter!

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-01-09

Chapter: 21

So I was rushed when I reviewed last time and didn't get time to ramble. Plus I was on my phone and typing on my phone annoys me. But, now I'm on my laptop, so by God will I make up for it!


Mike, ugh. Honestly, he would frustrate the hell out of me if I was in Anna's shoes. So charming, so hot, so cheeky, so fun. At the same time, so arrogant, such a smart arse, and so drug addicted. And then Rob, he's still just so fricken adorable! But I dunno, personally, I think I'd get sick of someone like Rob after a while. It's all good to begin with, but after a few months of it or whatever you're like 'Dude... relax. Get mad. Go get drunk and do something stupid. Do SOMETHING!' That's just me though. I think I'd be the stupid girl that goes for the guy with issues.


Anyway. Anna really disappointed me with how she reacted to Sam. Poor Sam was so excited and so happy, and BANG. Anna shot her down. I kind of understand where Anna's coming from, Sam is in a loving relationship with Chester and gets to go on tour with them, and Anna's in an awkward relationship with Rob, is in love with and slept with Mike, and has to stay home on her own while they both leave. BUT. That is not Sam's fault, and Anna didn't need to be so nasty.


How exciting for Sam and Chester though! I just love them in your story. You always see stories about what a psychotic bitch Samantha is and how horrible her and Chester are toward each other, so it's nice to read something different. I may get hate mail for this next comment, but I really don't see her being that bad in reality. I mean, couples break up. Sometimes it gets nasty. Doesn't mean she's evil, doesn't mean he's evil. Means they don't work together, is all.


OK, I think I've rambled enough for this chapter and chapter 20 put together. So, only two more things to say... great chapter as always and update soon!

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-01-06

Chapter: 20

Aw, Anna was cute with Mike in this chapter. I really hope he can get it together and get clean.


I hope your daughter's OK, must have been horrible for the poor little thing.

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-01-06

Chapter: 20

I hope your daughter feels better soon! Amazing chapter as always! I hope Mike can somehow get clean. I want him to be okay. I can't wait for the next chapter!

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2013-12-30

Chapter: 19

Mike, please let them help you, you can do it! As you can probably tell from my screen name, Mike is my favorite, and I hate to see him in such a bad place...I know he can turn things around though, and hopefully he will.


And Anna needs to admit her feelings for him. It's hard to be torn between Mike and Rob, they're both great guys. But deep down I think she knows it's Mike she loves.


I love your story, you did a great job portraying the emotions both with Mike's close call and with the strain his addiction is putting on the band. Can't wait to read more!

From: Crimson

Date: 2013-12-27

Chapter: 19

Mike. Get. Clean. He can't ruin it for himself and his band mates. I was surprised to see Rob take such an authoritative role, but I liked it! He pushed that sweet side away and laid it straight. And poor Anna doesn't have a clue on what to do :/ but anyway amazing chapter as always! Update soon!

From: nachteule

Date: 2013-12-27

Chapter: 19

I'm so glad you like my rambling. 'Cause I tend to do it a lot, ha.


It's so sad to see how badly Mike's relationships are suffering because of his habit, and I really feel for Chester helping him shoot up. Although, I have to say, Chester is being a bit of an enabler. He needs to take a page out of Rob's book and say "screw it" and get Mike some REAL help. Let him get committed, I think. But I'm a hard arse, so there you go.


Things seem so awkward with him and Anna now! It's like Anna's embarrassed that she accidentally make it obvious that she cares about him, and he is embarrassed because she saw him in the state he was in the night before. It really shows that they care A LOT more about each other than either of them are willing to admit.


Methinks Rob's gonna be more than a tad pissed off if/when he finds out about Anna and Mike, and that makes me feel sad for him already just in anticipation of it. He's so upset about Mike going downhill, I really think he'll be devastated that he's been so concerned about someone who slept with his girlfriend.


Almost over makes me sad. A second part makes me happy again! It's like Damned Nation all over again!! I love Altered as well though, so as long as you're updating something I'll be fine :) So, see what happens when you thank me for my rambling? The next review you get is even worse! Haha, update soon!!

From: Crimson

Date: 2013-12-26

Chapter: 18

Ahh these tears in my eyes xD you scared me for a second! I thought Mike was going to die :( and then Chester just setting off Anna...it felt like the world was crashing down and all of them were going to be torn apart. This chapter was just...wow utterly amazing! Update soon!

From: nachteule

Date: 2013-12-26

Chapter: 18

Ohhh drama!! I love me some drama! Chester was fucking scary, I think I'd feel like passing out if he went off at me like that too. That smiley face was just the cutest though, what a big dork.


I really don't think Anna should be held responsible for what Mike did. Like she said, he was messed up before he met her. And, it takes two to tango, as they say. He knew that's he was with Rob when he was shamelessly flirting with her. He has to do something about his addiction and learn better ways to manage his feelings, and Anna (still) needs to work out what the hell her feelings are, and work out what to do about them. Because, although what happened to Mike wasn't her fault, she's still not doing the right thing.


Anyway, enough rambling from me. AWESOME chapter!!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2013-12-25

Chapter: 17

Two words: Oh dear.

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