You'd think from the title that this is a smutty fic. While the smut scenes are amazing, the plot is even more. Great writing.

Oh. Damn.

I wasn't expecting this, like, AT ALL, and when I read "chapter 23/22" I was like wtf? Is there any issues with LPF?

But then I read it, and....oh god. So. Damn. Hot. And. Awesomely. Beautiful. And. Sweet.

Oh god. Now I'm officially missing this story.

I love your unexpected presents! THIS WAS HOT. Omg Chester, I love dominant Mike too!

Yay I love unexpected presents! :3

WOAH. SUPER SECRET CHAPTER!

And it was the bestttt. <3

The camera! oh, Mike, of course you would do that ;D

SO HOT! thank you for the bonus chap!

<3 This was so amazing. I'm so sad it's the end :(

No. No. No. No....I don't want it to be over. It was so amazing....it's always been, ever since the first chapter. I remember reading it, and knowing right away that this would have been an awesome story. I was so right.

But, alright, this means that you're free to spoil us with another amazing story of yours, yay!!! I hope it will come soon. I can't wait for more of your amazingness. I can never wait for your amazingness. It just stuns me every single time...and....thank you for sharing your beautiful gift with us.

Aw im sad to see that this is over but I loved this story so I know I'll be coming back to read it again and again.

Great story with a great end. =) I will miss this story, I don't now what to read now. =D

I love happy endings and this was perfect. <3 I loved every little bit no matter how sad or suspenseful it was. This story was incredible! I love it and it makes me want to hug them all! I wish it would get on the Reccommended list! You did a phenomenal job with this and for that I congratulate and thank you. :)

I must be the only guy on lpfiction lol

Anyway great story. One of the best IMO. You inspire me to keep writing my crappy oneshots so that readers have something to look at while waiting on another installment of your literary art. Well done.

Fave

*stands up and claps* :'D

Okay firstly, thank you for using the money he got from Becky lol.

Secondly, did you use "to no end" because of my post on tumblr?! If so LOL.

And thirdly, when I read this part "Actually, this is not the end. This is only the beginning." I started singing Waiting For The End, but the glitch mob remix.

This was a good end to a great story. <3333

Aww :') such a happy ending!!

this is by far one of my all time favorite stories EVAR. <3

Oh my god. No. This can't be the 21st of 22 chapters. No. This can't be over. No. I don't want it. Please don't make it end.

PLEASE!

I could have sworn I reviewed this chapter... Eh. Oh well, I'm doing it now!

Aaaanywho, it seems that Chester and Mike are okay... but... Chester, you can't walk around with a stab wound... Oh, it all comes down to this..! Will the final chapter be happy and sweet, or heartbreaking? Gaah! The suspense is killing me (it's not even killing me softly!!) I'm awaiting the next update. 333

An emotional chapter. :) I'm happy they talked to each other but I'm sad the story will end soon. =D

But it's a cute chapter anyway.

Aw so cute! I'm sad Chaz is hurt but I'm happy that Mike and Ches talked it out.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I just want to hug Chester, give him a great big bear hug. I'm glad he's finally changed, it was for the better too. :') Now they have each other! And Chester will heal, and they'll be happy. I was almost worried that you were gonna end this badly! But you didn't. I love this story so much! There's so much love and happiness. It's wondeful. :)