I LOVED IT I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. INFACT I LOVED IT SO MUCH IM GONNA MAKE THIS WHOLE REVIEW IN CAPS LOCK. I LOVED HOW YOU DESCRIBED THE BEGINNING. AND CHESTER. THAT'S SO SWEET OF HIM TO THINK OF MIKE AND GET HIM MEDICINE. AWWWW. AND THEN WHEN THEY WERE BACK IN BED! OH. THAT WAS ADORABLE. WITH CHESTER'S CONFESSION. MIKE'S ACCEPTANCE. AND THE KISS AND THE SEX. IT WAS ADORABLE. I LOVED THE LINE "Maybe it's because I actually wanted him in my mouth." THAT WAS THE BEST. AND HOW THEY KEPT SAYING THE OTHER WAS PERFECT, BEAUTIFUL, OR AN ANGEL! IM TELLING YOU. I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED. I LOVE IT SO MUCH I WANT TO MAKE LOVE TO IT! LOL.

I think it would be really cute if he got a job at the cafe with Mike... Or where ever Mike's working since it got burned down. They should work some place together. :)

So, this was like effin' amazing <3 I'm glad he quit! But is it really gonna be that easy for him? What if that Jack guy comes looking for him and says he has a debt to pay or something D: oh I should not say that loolol. Keep this happy. But that was just a thought. For some extra drama ;D

and as for Chaz's job, maybe he could get a job at a pancake place! LOL ooh yeah that'd be good hahah. You'd enjoy writing that lol.

But yeah this is like the longest review I've left. Ever. On any story. And you're a very good writer :3

aaaaaaaaaaah I loved this chap!

and about your question:

I think Chester should apply to a couple of jobs (shop assistent etc.) but it doesn't work out and then someday Mike is playing the piano and Chester starts singing and Mike is amazed... and maybe they form a band together? but just a little one, one that makes enough money but is certainly not as big is Linkin Park? or maybe they just keep making music for fun and Mike asks him to help him in his art gallery! :D oooooor he just get's a job at the McDonalds ^^

yaaaaaaaaaay! Chester is being nice to Mike woooohooooo! xD

*screams* Sounds like Chester is chilling out with the attitude a bit. This made me squeal so loudly. POOR MIKE! I think I would have shown those guys a little piece of right hook and left hook, but that's just me ^_~ OOOOOH I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! I hope it comes soon!!!!

Yes, I love you!!!!!! You should make longer chapter a bit more often U.U I can't bear to wait all that time for something I adore so much and then be rewarded with a so little chap T.T you can't treat me - us - so bad!!

You know what, I don't even know what to write more. I totally loved this chapter, everything's just so right and I can't fucking wait for an update. Like, I'm serious, I can't. I know it won't be so easy for Mike and Chaz to become what we want them to become, but I like it, and I honestly wouldn't have liked it that much if it were that easy U.U

Yeah, that doesn't make sense.

I.

Want.

An.

Update.

NOW.

I see you incorporated your love of pancakes, miss princess pancake head :P haha.

But yaaay for it being longer than normal [: and it was awesome as always.

Aw! :3 yay Chaz saved Mike! <3

Oh yes i do love you! XD i freaked out when i saw this new chapt.

You totally made me to log in and leave a review and that's a big deal u must know haha.. Anyways i love reading conversations between rob and ches. They're so funny and sweet. And so is drunk mike lol

If you don't update, I'll give up on my life...or maybe something else.. like..um... okay all i want to say is that ur the best.

I LOOOOOVE YOOOOOU! It was longer and so much more happier! I'm so happy Chester was there to rescue Mike again. Aw, and Chester has finally come to his senses! He loves Mike! He didn't admit but he's close! And Rob and Joe, Awwwwwwwwwww! I'm melting. I loved this chapter! And I hope there are many more like it!

HAHAHAHAHA DRUNK MIKE IS AMAZING XD This is my favorite chapter so far, I can't wait for the next one! :D

I really liked this chapter. It's nice to see Chester softening up a bit, although I love his hard exterior. I busted out laughing at the part where Rob was like, "OH MY GOD YOU CUDDLED" haha. I'm sure it was difficult for someone like Ches to admit that! He probably died a little inside haha.

I hope he considers not whoring himself anymore!!! I really really loved this chapter! It was a nice break from all the anger =]

Update soon!

Hi. Hahha [:

So, I'm just happy to see Chester is beginning to realize he is not worthless and not what everybody tells him and is maybe gonna open up his heart to Mike [:

It was bound to happen eventually. And cute best friend Rob is gonna help him out of his life now. Well I hope [;

Poor Chester man... I feel so bad for him. :( He should stop putting on that tough guy act and listen to Rob. His life wouldn't be so sad then. :(

Oh shite :o poor Chaz! <3 I enjoyed this chapter :D can't wait to read the next chapter.

At first I was like, "oooh, no Mike in this chapter?? Naaaww!" But then I read it, and I really liked it. Truth to be told, I'm not one of those who enjoy pathetic breakdowns when they starded up as 'though' ones (I hope I gave the idea of what I really mean XD), but this one was perfect. As this whole story, it's very well done, it gives a lot of emotional feeling but it keeps it real. I mean, it's not that kind of emotional that makes you think about sappy romances....no, it's the real emotional. The kind of emotional that makes you tremble and say "wow, I can feel it".

Chester is like that. I can feel him, he's real. Oh well, at least he could be XD

That's what I love of this story. And I can't wait for more.

Oh, so the oh-so-heartless hooker has feelings after all! :3 It was about time to admit it to yourself, Chester >.> Seriously, all this acting tough an cool has been so fake and gowing on my nerves...now go show Mikey some love! XD

What the fuck did I just write in my review??? O.o I must be drunk. Excuse my mistakes, I'm tired lol

Me??? An amazing inspiration??? Oh my god *swoons* you're amazing!! And this story is as well (Oh well, it's yours lol)........

It's useless to say that I loved this chapter. I love angst and love/hate games, and your writing is just perfect!!! Keep it going and please widen your chapter!!! You always left me begging for more T.T

[Oh and btw did you listen to 'Roxanne'? Lol]

Oh crap :o I wonder who's after jack?