awwwww~ at last they had each other whether on soul or body， i feel happy for them!

and the slash scene just so HOT! i can feel their love, care and happiness, think that love can cure everything, so happy chaz is a carefree guy by now with his hubby~ XD sweet for YAY~!

u did a really great work! i love it sooooo much! *add fav*~ :D

Good chapter! love it~

the part mike help chaz to get dressed just soooo amazing, when mike hug chaz and tell him he is beautiful, thats feeling touched ><!

looks thing going good~ XD they back to stage for yay!

and the last pov...wanna read more!~ good work~ plz update soon~ :D

love this chapter! :D

yus they are a warm family, i love that they all nice~

everyone really cute ><

and hope chaz can stop hurt himself soon >< awwww

wanna read the next! plz update soon!~ :D

aww mike isso understanding and Chaz is trying so hard. Joes not stupid and he sounds accepting. this is soooo cute!!

this story is turnin out great,cant w8 for more

good chapter~ love it! XD

for this thing, everyone's response are different, and thank god mike not yell at chaz, he is so warm for chaz.

the line chaz said about "Who would care for me" made me sad... >.<

and their kiss, sweet~>.<

but chaz wtill wanna cut himself? awww i wanna read more, wanna know what will happen!

good work! :D

I dont think it is that hard to read. but if you want to fix it Put -General POV- after chester's Pov paragraph. And In english we use quotations for dialogue. For example,"Mike licked Brad." but If you leave it like it is it will still be amazing. update soon. i cant wait to see how the band reacts to chester.

great! hope you update soon!

and no, i am not a beta but your English is pretty good, you don't need one so urgently. I could informally proofread your chapters if you want, but I'm really busy with school this month, so I will rarely be online.

Great story, I love it, but you might consider at least formatting it, because this way it's kind of hard to read..and you might also get a beta...other than that, I con't wait for the next update!

happy see this update~ :D

poor chaz. but the part he crying and mike take him in his arms is warm and sweet, think that maybe mike have some kind feeling to him too? now chaz need to the hospital, they will find his secret right?

so i really wanna read the next! how these going awww love this chapter~ great job! :D

poor*****oooopsss *sweat drop*

D: omgg por chazzyyy

Good chapter.

poor chaz, think that love is torment at here, but hope it will become sweet in future.

wanna know what will happen. :D

Good start! I want more~~~

Loved it.