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Part Of Me Wont Go Away by Vampire Princess

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From: Samy

Date: 2014-08-29

Chapter: 12

Holly shit man I finished this story like last week and I loveeeed it lol this story reminds me so much of True Blood, like the setting and the rivalries and stuff except no one ends up prego which is another reason I love this story omfg chaz is too cute!!! Will this be updated? I hope so ;)

From: trishia

Date: 2014-07-17

Chapter: 12

how did you know that pregger chaz is the best thing? *cries on chazs tummy* cute cute story and mike is brave like usual coming back for his love..i want to see them together always in stories.congrats for being back!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2014-07-17

Chapter: 12

I never thought I would see this update one day. Thank you for being around here and writing stoires. I still remember when I read its first story back then, I was so much a different person from now lol.

When Chester said he hated Mike for making him pregnant, Mike was sort of shocked. Haha It's so cute, though I know it must be really hurt, poor Chester. Congrats for them! They have their own precious babe Jennifer. She would be a beauty like her dada and a brave girl like her daddy!

From: eggplant

Date: 2014-07-17

Chapter: 12

The site sucks with hackings, code numbers, errors, and everything else. But you saved it showing up again. With a story where Chester is pregnant. How could I not see it before?


Mike better take care instead of leaving, the kids didn't reach up on his partner by themselves. Cool story, sex and drama, fantasy included. You deserve a rating.

Greetings

From: wz

Date: 2014-07-16

Chapter: 12

This was so beautiful and hot I don't even know what to say. I almost forgot you were one of the greatest preg-fic writers. It might sound stupid but I was so much younger when I used to read your fics and they literally made my day, I cried and bit my nails in happiness, you probably don't even remember me but I still can't believe you're back here. It's been so long, seeing your name makes me feel weird. Weird in the best way. I started reading this fic so long ago, I was angry because it was never continued, I stopped reading when your first part was still not completed, so there was never a chance for me to know how things went.. And look at this.. Pregnant Chester? How the freaking brick could I ever miss it? It's one of my weaknesses Hahaha and it is because of you, your stories made me realize how cute something illogical can be. Mike is such a great father and a nice companion, he's amazing.. And I'm glad Rob got a kick back in the butt. I'll never not ask you to continue this and keep writing, this site has missed you. The slash parts were also way too good, how did you do this? I can't wait for the next chapter, reading "Updated in 2014" again. It feels like home.

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-07-16

Chapter: 12

Had to sit down and read the first story and then this to catch up haha but first of all, welcome back! You have an incredible story here and I could not stop reading for anything. The characters are wonderful and portrayed so well! So many twists! I never expected Daniel to turn Mike or Chester to get pregnant, but it took the readers for a ride! I'm glad they got through all of the obstacles thrown at them. They are so strong together and it amazes me that even years or months apart cannot even faze their affection for each other. I believe Mike is nothing like Rob considering the fact that he cares for Chester and actually loves him. It isn't all about lust, but hell the sex is hot. Rob got what he deserved in the end. Take a hint and leave them alone, but no, he had to keep terrorizing the poor couple. I really thought Mike was gone for good and that Chester would have to raise the child himself, but he came back! And as a human! But with a vampire child. I wonder how that is going to play out? I wonder how she will grow and how she will control her urges. She has the best parents, though. I think things will turn out just fine in time. I love this so much! Thanks for updating!

From: wz

Date: 2014-07-16

Chapter: 12

Oh ok a long day is waiting for me, I'll have to read everything again. Haahaha

From: Exogenesis

Date: 2012-12-08

Chapter: 11

Hi this is Kyle, I'm sorry I broke the rules. It won't happen again, I promise. I appreciate that you told me what was going on, because I probably would have never found out. :) and I have a question: can you delete my other account? Im just going to be using this one now, and I don't want a ghost account floating around. :) sorry if that's too much to ask

From: mary_mala_mi

Date: 2012-09-27

Chapter: 11

wow! it's so good to see a new chapter:) and I'm happy that rob's dead:) LOL i don't care how bad it sounds, i juast like the idea that he will not disturb Chester and Mike anymore:) and it's great that Mike is human again! wonderful:))

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2012-09-27

Chapter: 11

OOOOOOOOHMYGOD! you update this again!!!!! XD im so happy that!! *dancing!* XD

after 3 years, yes, very long XP but like Sun, i remember the whole story too~ love this story so much! :3

OH chaz and mike still that SWEET together, they are perfect, why rob couldnt see that? his heart must be blind.

finally! the rob dead! ohhh im so afraid that he still there when they found that mike bacame human again, awww ><

after 5 month! i can image chaz's suffering in these five month(he is so cute blush for the 'pile of plates' XP), but still, this couple is lucky! now mike back! and they both human, with their baby~ :D


cant wait t read more! hope you will find the next chap back soon! >< *hugs!*

From: Cookies

Date: 2012-09-26

Chapter: 11

I can't believe you updated this.



Freaking finally.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-09-26

Chapter: 11

OMG.....i rubbed my eyes with my fists twice since I didnt believe what I saw. i was like "are you kidding? is LPF fucked up again so the old data rushed forward?" and then I knew i was wrong. You really updated it....

It was long time, but surprisingly I still remember them clearly. I missed Mike and Chester in this fic so much. When Mike killed Rob, I almost clapped my hands. The bastard was finally dead and he deserved that. however when i read Mike might would die for this and meet his long dead brother. i was such worried. God, Is Mike going to be a ghost? Poor Chester will raise their children alone? I left those questions in my head. But you were wonderful and kind, you just let Mike became human being once again. That was great! He, Chester, and their unborn babes would be together like a common family. God bless them!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2011-05-21

Chapter: 10

It's nice to see you again! I know you are still here but you know just I mean you are starting write something<3 Dont stop! I feel so uneasy about the unborn baby, he or she will be fine, right? Mike is the real father, isn't he? And I really hope that Rob will stay away from the couple ASAP, although I know it's not possible.

By the way I'm sorry for the delay review, forgive me plz;(

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2011-05-16

Chapter: 10

...Daniel is starting quite an uproar.. I hope that whatever happens Mike and Chester won't succumb to the influences around them..

I have faith that the baby is Mike's! Mike and Chester will live happily ever after!!! haha at least that's what I look forward to ^_~

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-05-16

Chapter: 10

new chap! yay! :D im happy see you update! like this story very much!


and AW! XD what can i say???? Rob and Daniel, you two are both pathetic! HA! what they want? what he did? i just wanna laught on them about to said the baby is robs, sucker! XDD how obscene they are can think about this idea...sigh, i hope chaz and mike will not be influence by this, that must be fake! and yus! mike, hit the damn robs ass! he cant let chaz pregnant, just mike can! awww!


and now they will have more plan? huh? aw ><they juat want our bennoda couple broken! aww!


anyways, wanna read more so much! great chap! :D love it! <333

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2011-04-07

Chapter: 9

I love this story so much! I'm such a sucker for vampire stories or any kind of A/U story! Oh I hope things will be alright between the happy family... First, we gotta make sure Chester survives the pregnancy =[ Then, they'll have to figure out what to do after that whether Mike is going to return human or Chester a vampire... OH I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT!!


AAARG, someone kick Daniel in the balls already!!!! He's ruining the happiness =[ UPdate soon cuz I need to know what's gonna happen with this beautiful couple!!!!!

From: LpReem92

Date: 2011-04-06

Chapter: 9

Awwwwwwwww!! Sorry I never reviewed this story. I just finished it! I was four chapters behind, I also suck *hides in shame*

But really!!!! Chester is a human, and Mike is a vampire and Chester is whaaaaaaaaat? he's pregnant O.O I have no idea why, but the thought of Chester being pregnant always cracks me up *hides*

And I aslo loved when Chester said 'Mike has the ability to turn males pregnant?!' lol, so funny. I love Joe! And I hate Daniel! Urggggggg, and what the hell with Rob? He needs to leave them alone! lol, but over all, I fucking adore this story and the first part of it!! Great job!!!! Update soon please!! <33333333333

From: Spider

Date: 2011-04-04

Chapter: 9

Dude, im like, a REAL HUGE FAN of this story. xD


I remember when i first read 'It's Not Over' and i was completely crazy over it to the point that i had skipped school for a whole day faking sickness just to be able to read it all in one day, hahaha =D


I didn't see you update the first time, but i was wayyy too excited when i saw this updated just now... man, i wish Chester didn't turn human, that makes it kinda all sad. xP I'm in for a vampire bennoda family, don't make them all human!! xD but it's already written and I'm guessing mike will turn human and the baby will be too.. xD


Update as soon as possible, okeyy? <3

From: SVeLP

Date: 2011-04-04

Chapter: 9

Sorry, I'm one of those people that's to lazy to leave a review but I'll leave one especially for you ;) I really like this story, I wasn't expecting the mpreg btw, it makes Mike so protetive..cuuuute. I want to know what Rob's evil plan is! Update soon so I can find out! :D

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-04-04

Chapter: 9

aww new chap!~ :D


good chap, sweet when chaz and mike with each other, and think i said this before, but again i really dont like the Danny, he is so suck guy errr >< yeah, best back to rob!

and the 'cant control anger' mike is very hot! XD but seems chaz can make him calm, thats good~ :3

and i love that, chaz dont really care be a human or a vampire, he just wanna be with his lover forever, in my mind this IS the important thing.


and joe is so cool there! almost koew everything. lol

and they think their baby will be super HOT? hahaha thats epic!~ XDD

they will be the super happy family right?~ >333<


good chap, love it! and wanna read more~ :D

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