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It's Not Over by Vampire Princess

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From: LpReem92

Date: 2010-09-24

Chapter: 11

Okay, First let me start off by screaming


AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!


This story is freaking awesome, I'm most defiently going to read the sequal. I mean, if it was as half as good as this, it means that it's awesome!!


Before I knew about this site, I always had this idea that Chaz would make the perfect Vamp ever. And when I read your story, I knew I was right!


I liked how you make him a real vampire, not a sparkly one. urg. Don't get me wrong, I love Twilight, but I can't stand all the buzz.


Okay, I love the plot and it's really interesting and had me hooked. Chester + Mike + Rob are really badasses. LOVING it.


Poor Chester, they killed his parents in front of his eyes, and poor Mikey, his dad killed his brother and blame it on vampires :(


I also loved that you co-worked with Bekka, she's awesome author, too!


NOw, I'm off and I'll read the follow-up fic as well :) :)

From: shinodatoes

Date: 2009-07-22

Chapter: 11

something i forgot to mention earlier...

i noticed part of the lyrics of Given Up in the last chapter. was that deliberate or just coincidental?

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-07-22

Chapter: 11

*cries* that was awesome. *wipes away tears* so frickin good!

They parted ways :(

the'll be together soon I hope :)

mikey made a very tough choice...

I really do hope Chester finds a way to become human :D


*hates brad and rob with a passion* wankers...

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-07-22

Chapter: 11

good story not over XDD looking forward the season 2~! LOL

hope mike will back to chaz soon~

From: ToDelete

Date: 2009-07-21

Chapter: 11

check before posting ;) there's a huge part post twice in a row


"Mike's stomach lurched as Chester took a step forward. Instantly his hand fell to his belt, long fingers clasping his shaft. He would not be a victim! Not anymore. He had told Chester things he had never told anyone else, he had opened his heart and his legs to him and Chester just threw that back at him by attacking him. He was going to pay."


;)

From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2009-07-21

Chapter: 11

I support all vampire fics (except Twilight) so of course I stuck with it! I'll probably stop by the sequel too.


Rustic. I like the ending of this, how all sparkly and bittersweet it was. Rob and Brad's very patient behavior did surprise me though...que sera sera...deus ex machina. Whatever. It's all good :]

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-07-21

Chapter: 11

awww it's over *cries* Oh wait...WE HAVE A SEQUIL!!! *dance*


Hun I ADORED writing this with you *hug* <3 <3

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-07-21

Chapter: 11

Awww the truth finally set them free......hope they find each other again someday.

From: shinodatoes

Date: 2009-07-21

Chapter: 11

beautiful ending. sad, but beautiful.

i can't wait for the sequel.

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-07-21

Chapter: 11

God, that was so, so sad :( But I like it! That's one hell of a story :D Can't wait for the sequel :) <3

From: Susan!

Date: 2009-07-20

Chapter: 10

Update!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-07-19

Chapter: 10

Good chapter~ this feeling so drama~ XD


Now those bad guys got what they want, oh poor chaz and mike, they will try to kill each other...awww Rob and Brad just really really bad, they will go to the hell aw!


Waiting for your update~ XD

From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

Waaahhh, I got mad confused! D: and the fight scenes, I felt could be improved. I'll re-read it again when I'm more awake and see if that changes my opinion about being confused.

From: Alice

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

Aww, that made me so sad, Rob and Brad finally managed to tear them apart ;(

Still, very good chapter. Am waiting for more :)

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

Those two boys, Rob and Brad, got what they wanted. Pity they killed Phi to make it work.

From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

ooo cant w8 to see what happens next!!! ^^

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

Wooooooo! Can't believe pt2 is almost done :D I so, so loved writing this with you Hun :)

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

Oh my! That two are really a problem! I mean Rob and Brad, they..ugh! I can't stand them <_<

The first part was really sweet, though :)

Now, I'm very, very curious t know what will happen and I seriously hope that there will be a sequel 'cus this story is just too awesome! <3

From: shinodatoes

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

grrr

evil Rob! evil Brad!

i hope Mike and Chester manage to get back together.

please update ASAP!!! i want to know how it ends!

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-07-18

Chapter: 10

*loud gasp* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Ches believes rob and mike believes brad! *cries* nuuuu!

That's evil! *pouts*

now ches is gonna leave with rob :'(

update soon, I need to know what happens next.

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