this is such an awesome story!

can't wait for more

...oh.chaz will give up something for mike ...that is so romantic....anyway,its a good story and I like it!coutinue please~

Mikeys scared :(

I hope everything turns out ok :/

chazzy is so loving :) <3

I love the name you gave this chappie "the deadly duo" XD awesome!

Update soon!

A Vampire could change into a human! wow! thats interesting~ :D and Chaz prefer to renounce his eternity life for a vampire hunter, thats really sweet! he just more like a human than many human..XD

good chapter~ and Im waiting for the next~ :D

Haha! This is always the part that I pin as where mike turns into a whimp XP but I couodn't help it I have a thing for weak n hurt protaganists lmao.

Seriously hope we can get over this block Hun, im having way too much fun with this story to let it stop :3

*sighs* I hope they won't forget the enemies waiting for them to slip up. Focus boys focus!

Aww that was sweet :) Really Chester would change into a human for Mike? That's big, lol. Can't wait to read more and I hope the sequel won't be too far away 'cus I'm really addicted to this story :)

Loved the chapter name XD 'oh shit...' genius!

That was a fricking hot chapter! 8D

poor dave got curious [spelling?] and got killed! :(

AWESOME chapter!

Update soon!

oh..Poor dave!damn!I mean,he was so poor and...........if he could come later..in the moment,just this moment he was comeing!!

and something was happend. oh no.meanwhile,rob has teamd up with someone?I wana know who is..

continue please!!

I feel like you're talking 'bout me...I always read and never review. XP Too lazy. Anyway, I just love this story as I'm sure you can tell, I always bug you about it. But nice chapter. Poor Chazy and Mike couldn't finish what they started. *giggle* Can't wait for the next chapter! XD

It was very serendipitous that my phone decided to load the Stories list instead of the other site I was attempting to visit. I was going to just go back to my homework, but then I saw an update.

Good job at making me procrastinate even further. :p

I died a little when Dave died :[ damn Jews! XD I kid, love Jews, but no seriously, damn Brad and Rob's ironic duo of doom.

*gasps* You killed DAVE!!!! Why?!?!? *pouts* Wrong, wrong, dirty wrong!!!

Aww poor Dave! :( And damn! He could have came a little later, LOL :D Awesome chapter, so hot between Mike and Chester. Love it, girls <3

It just keep on getting better and better, if that's even possible anymore. Can't wait for the next update!

Nuuu! I always regretted Dave dying :<

Oh well, still love writing this with ya hun ;)

Kwaiiii! God I'm proud to write this with ya Hun :3

Brad aligned with Rob? oh no, those evil soul, they will try to hurt Chaz and Mike right? :O

And I'm glad Mike understand that a Vampire need blood for survival, and Chaz just really sweet. awww

Waiting for the next! :D

I have nothing to say except that your typos are severe. You repeated like, half the story word for word. Not to mention some spelling mistakes. But the repetition is what I had to point out.

Ouch Brad and rob together o_o Now, that's a problem! Hope everything will go fine for Mike and Chester.

Update soon :)

Hard to see Chester trying to not make Mike hate him. Glad to see Mike understand.

Rob and Brad.......problems, big problems!