Wow...I can't find words...that was truly amazing. Like no lp fanfic I've ever read. Beautiful portrayal of desperation and love. Also brilliantly hot...

^crying

I've never seen this before.

It's awesome, dolorous and beautiful. It really moves me much. I don't know what Chester's tomorrow will be, but I'm so happy to see that Rob made him feel be enriched at the moment.

Wonderful job!!!:D

Before I say anything, I think you should change the rating of this (lol). I was expecting a G story so yeah, the hot sex suprised me. xD But I enjoyed it, the story. The beginning was so careful, so quiet, and sensitive. And when it got to the part of them kissing, you feel for the characters despite Rob's awkwardness at first, as if they were MEANT to do it. Everything flowed naturally and the fact that he was dying added so much passion to the sex. And I agree with the reviewer below me, that I think Chester died the next day. Nice work. :)

*adds to favorites*

I loved this story when it was first posted! I'm so glad you reposted it, because it is really beautifully written.

I like how you are able to combine a hot sex scene with all of the emotion, and neither part is compromised. I think it's pretty rare to see, it's usually one or the other.

The only part that confuses me is the ending. It kind of makes it seem like Chester is going to die that night. Maybe thats what you meant, but I find it a little creepy...