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The Ocean Breeze by No~One

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From: Master_Of_Darkness

Date: 2008-02-19

Chapter: 1

I thought this was nice. The beginning started out sad and I like how it lightened up.

I thought the Chester/Mike scene was cute and well written.

I also liked the chic-flick thing... lol

From: SteppinRazor

Date: 2008-02-16

Chapter: 1

Well, this was pretty cute but I'm so sad for Rob. Don't worry Rob, I'll ALWAYS love you! LOL!

From: k9

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Date: 2008-02-12

Chapter: 1

I love this sooo much!!

I said "Yes!!", when I read a ward 'rob' in the first half of the story. (sorry!)

I feel so sorry for rob.

But on the other hand, I'm glad...because the person who Chester loved was Mike.

From: Dre

Email: dede_huard@Hotmail.com

Date: 2008-02-11

Chapter: 1

i really like your writing. it's a cute story too, loved it =)

From: KingMichael

Date: 2008-02-10

Chapter: 1

Wow.well,u make me feel so happy,i like this story..

LOL,i like bennoda~

From: Ben

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Date: 2008-02-10

Chapter: 1

That was so cute.I love it

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-02-10

Chapter: 1

I feel sorry for Rob.

But...

I'm so happy Mike and Chaz fall in love with each other...

I love this so much,that was so cute,Nice job!=D

From: Gummibear Queen

Date: 2008-02-09

Chapter: 1

I don't wanna put a damper on your story, it's quite good but I feel you jumped on the benoda bandwagon purely for the sake of writing that. You have room to explore much mor if you wanna go that route - in that situation Chester would be considering Rob's feelings to him getting together ith another friend.

From: Kenji Padalecki

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Date: 2008-02-09

Chapter: 1

Awwwww this was too cute for words. I loved it muchly. Glad to se some writing from you xx

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-02-09

Chapter: 1

o wow that was so cute! :P

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