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Bitter (Sweet) by tevl

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From: eba

Date: 2011-08-14

Chapter: 1

Hah, I'm glad Rob helped Brad, erm, release some tension. lol.

From: Silencer

Date: 2006-11-06

Chapter: 1

Hm wow, a fine new perspective of the whole mess during the last year. Bravo!



Silencer.

From: dark_red

Date: 2006-10-31

Chapter: 1

<i>Tak and Ryu and whatshisname...</i>


lmao. Odd, that's often how I feel about the whole Fort Minor brigade, myself.


I really enjoyed this. The speed and progress of the story is well done. I liken the whole thing to drug usage - how there are some bands (or just people in general) who use drugs to numb the pain of whatever shit's going on at the moment. Brad sees that Mike and Chester have some sort of secret that he believes is tearing the band apart, and it seemingly hurts him on a daily basis. But it's not until he learns their secret (firsthand, through his interaction with Rob) that he finds a way to forget what's happening before his eyes, forget the unraveling of the band. Which brings the story to a somewhat (no pun intended) bittersweet end. An end where they live in ignorance and stay together as a band that's not really plugged into the agenda of the band for god knows how long. I liked the end, for the record. It was sort of an anti-climax, having all these crazy things happen, then just ending it with everyone content in their ways with no desire to change. But I like that because it was less expected then perhaps some other ending.


I also liked your use of factual events (the Crank premiere, Chester stepping in for Holly Brook, etc.), or rather, the way you picked certain events and strung them together to create this mystery around the vocalists' closeness. Sometimes, it's just something you gotta do, since Mike and Chester don't give us *nearly* enough material to work with.


Loved the story, glad you're still writing LPfic. :)

From: Me

Date: 2006-10-31

Chapter: 1

""Other people’s secrets don’t mean as much when you’ve got one of your own.""


I LOVED THIS LINE. IS SO TRUE THOUGH.


Me.

From: hattu

Date: 2006-10-31

Chapter: 1

Ohhhh that was sooooo good to read!

Sarcasm, between line Bennoda, bitterness and a so nice hot drummer being all kind!


I loved it! Want to read more like that!


Greetz hattu

From: MissB

Date: 2006-10-30

Chapter: 1

oh, i loooved this. I mean i liked the plot and all but i so loved your writing in this one. There was such a beautiful sarcasm following with the narration and it had me moved and laughing. Especially the mike sings like a girl, part.

I loved that we don't get conclusion as to what the secret looks might mean. You leave it with the possibility that it wasn't even that important because Brad found something much better.

Your choice of words is, as always, incredible. But that's just because of your talent to handle characters and emotions.

I absolutely adored this one!!

sincerely

bibi

From: DrummerLadyBourdon

Date: 2006-10-29

Chapter: ?

[Oh my, when did I become such a bitter and disillusioned fan?] It happens. XD


[Rob’s rhythmic drumming as he practice, practice, practiced.] Mmm… I love Rob. I really do. lol.


[That damned knife starts twisting and digging into his side again and Brad shrugs off Rob’s warmth and vomits into the sink in their bathroom.] Poor Brad, and yay Rob!!


[warm mouth Rob…white hot Rob] Mmm….sexy.


[Brad’s finally found the sweet amongst the bitter] Rob IS such a sweetheart.


[transition into a new fandom will not be as easy as I had hoped] It’s all good!!!


I love the way you write. It’s simple, yet intriguing.


And Rob is super sexy. *drools a flood*


Update soon!


<3 DLB

From: soliloquy

Date: 2006-10-29

Chapter: ?

HELLO I LOVE YOU.


more coherent review to follow.

From: lycan

Date: 2006-10-29

Chapter: ?

I absolutely adore this. There's nothing else to say, but that was awesome. Please don't switch fandoms - please? Lol.

From: L~T

Date: 2006-10-29

Chapter: ?

Supernatural

Supernatural

Supernatural

Supernatural

Supernatural..


*cough*


*wipes drool off of face*


ANYWAYS...HAHA MIKE PULLING OFF SINGING LIKE A LITTLE GIRL omg that made me laugh..because its SO true and we all know it. Hahaha Brob..for some reason, that made me laugh. Not the concept..but the word. You ever say it out loud? Its funny.


..Wow...this is the first retarded review I've written all week! Be oober proud of me.


Anyways, I loved it. And damn then for taking forever on that album. Twas awesome. :)

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