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Dessert by bennoda_luv_is_my_thing1125

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From: slimmaz11

Date: 2005-10-18

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this was fuckin smashin wow i love it


from mrs chester bennington

From: slimmaz11

Date: 2005-10-18

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this was fuckin smashin wow i love it


from mrs chester bennington

From: slimmaz11

Date: 2005-10-18

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this was fuckin smashin wow i love it


from mrs chester bennington

From: Susan

Date: 2005-10-16

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ooooooh this story was lovely! i'm going to go read the sequal now.

From: lil slash monkee87

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Date: 2005-10-16

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Hey!! I just realized that I read this story yesterday and didn't review. That wouldn't be a big deal if I hadn't reviewed the sequel. Okay, I just confused myself. Anyway, I adore this story. I really like it. Oh, to all the haters out there, dessert is spelled correctly. Desert(as in the Sahara)is spelled with one s obviously. Cheers beautiful:)

From: Kirstie

Date: 2005-10-16

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Just to point out, it does matter if you spell Dessert wrong as it's the title of your story and it'll reflect badly on you.


I personally wouldn't want to read a story where the title was spelt wrong as it's and indication to what's beyond the click button.

From: Bitty

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Date: 2005-10-15

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omg..that was fuckin great!!

~Bitty~

From: Disjointed Heart

Date: 2005-10-15

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I liked this...well done!

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2005-10-15

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That was really good, a sequel would be awesome if you got the time.

From: twilight

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Date: 2005-10-15

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cute story, i loved it and i do hope you consider writing a sequal, i would love to find out what happens when they got home!! Congrats on your baby!!!

From: bennoda_luv_is_my_thing1125

Date: 2005-10-14

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well Vampire_Princess... i might add a sequel... if your lucky!!! hehehe... ya... my doc told me that tums were really good too... the only problem is, is we don't have any and can't get any for another two days... so i'm just avoiding 'bad foods'... lol... oh, and to the annonomys person who keeps insulting me... i really don't care how you spell dessert... that really doesn't matter now does it?? so plz... don't be so rude next time... have a little respect...

From: Trista

Date: 2005-10-14

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Yea we were talking about morning sickness and how to deal with it and he said Tums lasting effects and the Rolaids soft chews are really good because it gets rid of the heartburn fast and the added calcium is good for mom and baby. The creepy nurse gave me a bunch of stuff on being pregnant I’m kind of afraid to read it

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Date: 2005-10-14

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psst...

dessert is spelled with 2 "S"es.

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2005-10-14

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That's not it is it? IS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

From: Trista

Date: 2005-10-14

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Cute story try tums lasting effects for the heartburn :) my doctor told me about it its supposed to be be really good for the baby too

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