Oh my god. I have never been one to tear up at books and such, but this... This story was so powerful, it made me want to start sobbing. I just sat down and read every chapter in one go, and I have never been happier to waste two hours of my life. This was written so beautifully... I love how Mike struggles to keep everything in, so he doesn't worry Chester. And all the while, his friends are utterly supportive of him... That is friendship in its truest form. I wish that Mike and Chester could've gotten a happy ending, which is usually how Bennoda stories on this site end. But your ending was unique... Sad, but unique. I hope that Chester got to join his lover in death, so they could be together forever. I almost feel bad for Dave. He clearly needs help, but cannot find it. He loved Mike so much and wanted to be with Mike, but when Mike wanted space, Dave was unwilling, as he just wanted love. That was all he'd ever wanted; love. Thank you for writing this. Bravo.

I kept hoping Rob or Joe or Brad will rescue them. I was in tears by the ending. Beautifully written

The ending was so emotional! I had to step away for a few minutes because of how blurry my eyes were! The way you pieced everything together and how everything was written was beautiful... This is one of the few stories that can make me cry so much... I love it. I was listening to No Roads Left while reading that chapter and it tore me apart... I don't know what else to say about it... One of the best stories I have read, honestly.

Oh wow. I'm not sure I've ever been made to feel like my hearts about to burst by a fanfic before! I'm reviewing after readin start to finish.... And I'm in tears and feel so sad. But my god you kick ass!!!! Such a talented writer.... I've never been so glued to a fic or related so well with the characters. I can't believe mike died. Poor Chester baby.... Send him to me??? Haha. Well done you, you should be very proud of this

princess xxx

My God. This was such a beautiful story, I have tears in my eyes...Poor Mike. Poor Chester. :(

I must say this was one of the best fics I've ever read. When fics literally make me cry - I know they're amazing.

So even though you've reduced me to tears, I just wanted to say what a brilliant writer you are. I hope you post some new fics up some day.

Wow, tears were just pouring down my face. It was amazing and heartwrenching! I had to take a moment before writing this review because I couldn't see the screen with my blurry eyes. That had to be one of the best fics I've ever read. Your stuff is amazing. I just wish this had a happier ending.

omg!!!!why mike was to die??i hate you shinobi!

Ok, so I just spent my whole day off re-reading this cause, imo, there's nothing really good on the front page at the moment. Except for 'Glitter and Trauma' and a couple of others. . . =)

Anyways, I just thought I'd let you know that this is one of my top comfort fics (along with a few others of yours) on this site and that I think that you are one out of a handful authors that I absolutely adore. I know it must be weird for a complete stranger saying that they adore you, but its the truth. I adore your writing, and I hope you never give up or stop writing cause your words are so beautifully written and put together.

That's all I really wanted to say. . .I'm off to read some more of yours and other author's classics. Take care!

Jeez....that was some fic! I was addicted from the getgo as usual with your stories...but how terribly unfair for Mike to die at the end! That last chapter just about did me in...so sad but at the same time liberating for poor mike. He spent the entire time in this fic being miserable, hating himself, it almost seemed like it was the only way he could escape the pain and torture he had experienced. You are an amazing writer, Shinobi...thank you for posting such great stories.

I couldn't stop my tears.

You're great author, Shinobi, and I exactly want to read sequel.

I want Mike to free from Dave, not Mike's life.

If he died, Chester's heart will be broken.

In the end, Dave, only him, will be happy.

NO!! It's not right!!

Shinobi, please, please give us this sequel.

I'm sorry for my English because I'm Japanese.

GOD! *wipes at face madly* That was amazing...but amazingly saddddddddd. I was on the edge of my seat, man. And uh, sequel?! MOST DEFINITELY READING IT. Although I think there is only one chapter right now? I hope you continue!!

wow..that was..why'd you make him kill mike? i wanted a happy ending...hmph

it was still pretty good though

this is one of the greatest fics i have ever read!!!!! omg so sad i've read it about three time.... and i still get sad at the end.... damn straight u should make a sequel......please ^_^

~ASHES~

omfg i absolutley love it

the bester ever :D.....dont let mike die nooo i actually cried at the end :D...sequel pllleeasse :D

Ly

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I cant belive that you killed them.. I so hate u right now.. & I think I will die if you dont do a sequal.. this is just tooooooo sad... but you really are very verrrrry GOOD.. thanx...

sorry, i didnt finish..

Something about the ending wasnt quite right!! it made me feel wierd!!! it shud have been different i think but all in all GREAT WORK!!!

hi, can i just say this fic woz FANTASTIC!! so emotional, but not to much so, ur a great writer!!!

omg this was the best fic i've read...i loved it..it was so sad..i'm glad mikes finally free....cant wait for the sequal...excellent job!!

OOMFG this is so fucking sad, im like hystericly crying right now...OMFG....omfg...your an amazing writer, this is an awesme story. i love it :-)

This was wonderful my dear! I read the whole thing in a day...I'm looking forward to reading the sequel!