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RNW@Y by Peorth Undead

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From: Emerald Amber

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Date: 2004-01-04

Chapter: 11

HI! :)

My earlier comment meant this: your scenes were so full of action that you made look like a movie!


This last chapter was too quick! Too fast! Yet, Rob catches my attention... while he tries to catch Phe's attention!

Put more sentiment into those two and bring them to a new home?;D

Em.A.

From: Miko

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Date: 2004-01-03

Chapter: 11

w0oT hah!! the bastard and his bitch got their just desserts. please do a sequel.. this story is just to good ^^ *bribes with cookies cut in the shape of linkin parkers*

From: onlyme

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Date: 2004-01-03

Chapter: 11

haha the evil bitches got locked up!!! please do a sequel ppl will read it *looks at you wiv puppy dog eyes* pwwease???

From: Easier2Run

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Date: 2004-01-03

Chapter: 10

NOOOO ROB!!!! DON'T DIE ON ME!!!!....oh and phoenix ;)


I'm so happy you're updating this story again! =)

From: Emerald Amber

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Date: 2004-01-02

Chapter: 10

Oh YES! This story is so good! The plot so full of twists and turns! It is very exciting! Phe's escaped was taken from a movie! WOW! And I'm sure Rob will be alright, right?Is it Mike to the rescue!!;D

Next part soon!

Em.A.

From: Oz LP fan

Date: 2004-01-02

Chapter: 10

oh shit! no dave! shit the guys hav 2 find them right, right?! u hav 2 update !

From: Miko

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Date: 2004-01-01

Chapter: 9

ohhh.. and the plot thickens. update soon please

From: Oz LP fan

Date: 2004-01-01

Chapter: 9

wow u updated alot! u so hav 2 update soon! this story is awesome

From: Oz Lp fan

Email: trunks_mistress@hotmail.com

Date: 2004-01-01

Chapter: 5

OMG POOR DAVE! The guys hav 2 ring the cops! update

From: sparklefinger

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Date: 2004-01-01

Chapter: 5

wonderfluffy!!!! *claps*

hehe

From: Emerald Amber

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Date: 2004-01-01

Chapter: 5

This is too good!! Yet too short!

The funniest and also creepy part of it is that the lunatic girl doesn't even know who Phe is! It's amazing! More please?

Em.A.

From: apple

Date: 2003-12-30

Chapter: 3

WHOA!!! THERE'S THE PLOT!!!


I like it mwey much. That girl is crazy (is she a girl, or is she a boy dressing up as a girl? lol). I liked that line, "Fine I'll call you Bingo... you're my dog." That was so funny! Update soon so I can find out what happened to my beloved Rob!

From: sparklefinger

Email: sparklefinger@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-12-30

Chapter: 3

hey sweetie!!!!! how be you!!!! this is damned wonderfluffyness!!!!!! find charity soon (not that i haven't read 2 chappys ahead of everyone!) but hurry!!!!!!!

From: Miko

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Date: 2003-12-29

Chapter: 3

whoa... pshyco!! ....and what happened to rob..is he ok..update soon please

From: Miko

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Date: 2003-12-29

Chapter: 2

haha, oh man...too funny....remind me to never give chaz and joe any form of sugar. haha, update soon please

From: apple

Date: 2003-12-29

Chapter: 2

“Phe Phe the Easter bunny, kicking my ass taking all Joe’s money…”


I nearly pissed my pants laughing at that!


I like this story, though it doesn't seem to have much of a plot. Update soon and prove me wrong!

From: submerine

Date: 2003-12-29

Chapter: 1

LOL!!!

I loved it

Is that the end or is there more?

LOL..Pheonix in a bunny suit

Joe and Chester-condom twins

I love it

LOL

From: Takemeunder01

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Date: 2003-12-29

Chapter: 1

*chees*


Very freakin good!!


I hope you right more!!! I like it a lot


1) being Phoenix is kinda the main guy and than 2) its not slasy..


Keep up the work!

From: Miko

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Date: 2003-12-28

Chapter: 1

haha! the condom twins! priceless. you have to add more. ^^ i can just picture phi phi in a pink rabbit suit. very cute ^^ *pats mike on his head* and you dear mikey..need to calm down before you give yerself a heartattack. hehe

From: Medusa

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Date: 2003-12-28

Chapter: 1

don't sound bad but i cna't see a plot or somthing like that anyway go on .

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