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The little things give you away by lost_noda

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From: Esmeralda

Date: 2022-01-28

Chapter: 20

Hey... That's not nice lol why just leave it there with that cliffhanger! I need the next chapter like right now.. Mike needs to own it, go to Patrick's place, and take Chester with him. They need to talk about their feelings and figure out what they are going to do because they certainly cannot continue ignoring each other . Thanks for updating!

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2022-01-20

Chapter: 19

I've been following this fic along but just realized never left a review before. Mike should go ahead and talk to Chester about his feelings. I'm pretty sure Chester feels about the same way and is just using that supposed relationship with Patrick to push his feelings for Mike away. Maybe fear? I don't know, but once they talk sincerely things will start to get better for them I hope .. thank you for the nice update!

From: Fable_star

Date: 2021-10-23

Chapter: 10

Love this story! The way you built it up... Poor poor Mike ❤️ what's going on with Anna? It seems like she wasn't this way before... Is it just the wedding or is there something else that's making her act this way?

Whatever it is I don't think it's right... She's really hiring Mike and what's worse is he has no idea why....

I love that Chester was able to see right through Mike and understand what was going on at the barbecue... Very perceptive.... I'm glad he did... It will be nice if Mike could talk this over with someone( tho in not sure how effective it would be when he's attracted to Chester

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2021-08-20

Chapter: 2

Oh Mike. You just need to admit it lol getting all flustered thinking about kissing Chester XD I love that you brought up Joe's frog. Those were the good ol' days. I get why Mike is reluctant to talk about the problems going on, but I hope he doesn't let it fester. He should tell someone. And Chester wanting to go on a date with a man is good idea. I do hope it will be Mike :) And I LOVE the comment about Chester not really having a type, but seeing the beauty in everyone. That's super sweet.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2021-08-09

Chapter: 1

Well all signs point to trouble for Mike's marriage. I hope Anna won't turn into a Bridezilla lol But denying Mike her time/attention/affection is no way to go, no matter how stressed/busy you are. I had to smile when he smiled so much when Chester texted.

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