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From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-01-20

Chapter: ?

The suspense is kill me right now, I can’t wait for the next update, I love that Brad has Chester... seriously makes me happy :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-01-17

Chapter: ?

I'm jealous of their lazy day. I want to stay home from work and eat and watch Toy Story and take a nap lol sounds awesome. I have no desire to fall asleep on Brad's chest though. Otis can keep that part XD


I feel for Mike here. He's really struggling to do all the right things and I'm glad that Chester is there to help talk him through it. Like Chester said, Mike shouldn't be trying to do this alone. I just hope they can help Brad and the whole truth will come out...not just the what, but they why. The why is the important part.


*hugs* to all of your characters! They all need it.

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-01-16

Chapter: ?

Another very good chapter, and I think it makes Chester a great friend that he doesn't tell Mike on the phone. It's a good idea to come over and have whatever discussion is coming at Mike's place, even if Brad is probably going to freak out and complain.


Please update soon :)

From: hattu

Date: 2019-01-14

Chapter: ?

Yey, two Updates!


Poor Otis, grown ups are sooooo diffcult sometimes...


I really admire Mikes patience and strengh, i would Go crazy. To find out About the selfharm and still no idea where this all coming from...

and Chester....he knows Whats Up and still hasn‘t checked on Brad?! He doesn‘t tell Mike but Leaves everything for Mike to Pick up....sorry but i would be more than a little pissed....


I Hope Brad manages to Trust someone...


Can‘t wait to read more


Thanks Hattu

From: ninja

Date: 2019-01-14

Chapter: ?

aww the part with the movie and the reading was super cute.

I can't wait to see what Chester has to say.

They both are great friends and maybe they'll help him better the two of them.

anyway, can't wait for the next chapter

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-01-10

Chapter: ?

Omg you are killing me with this suspense! I need to know what's going on with Brad and what has to do with Chester.. something heavy is happening here for Brad to be doing these things and to be acting this way. Thanks God he have the support of a friend like Mike.

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-01-10

Chapter: ?

God, well, god. This makes me cry seeing Brad in this way :( love the pace of your story :)

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-01-09

Chapter: ?

Nooo, poor Brad was hurting himself! It's a good thing that Mike made him confess it and they threw the blades away. The scene where Otis came to the bed at night and asked what was wrong with Brad was just so cute.


Please update soon!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-01-08

Chapter: ?

Oh goodness, poor Brad :( I didn't really see that coming. Cutting is just, ugh. It hurts my heart. I hope Brad will get some help and also open up about Chester, since there's clearly more going on. And the WHY. We didn't get the WHY for the cutting. And it's been going on for awhile. So is it the same WHY or a new WHY?


Mike is so patient with him. I'm glad he insisted that Brad throw the razors away. And poor little Otis, losing sleep over all this. *sigh*


I hope we get more insight in the next chapter. And screw Elisa for leaving him when he was really in need/pain.

From: Rivver

Date: 2019-01-07

Chapter: ?

And once again: POOOOR BRAD!! Seriously. I just want to cuddle him and take away all of his pain and punch whoever or whatever hurt him so. Something really tough must've happened to him to feel the need to cut (on top of his eating disorder) and can't wait to know. Or maybe I don't want to know. o.o Nah, yes. I definitely want to know. x) Mike is such an amazing friend here; caring and patient and understanding. Just what Brad needs right now, so no matter how bad it gets in Brad's head, I can rest assured that Mike will there to help him through it, and hopefully, out of it. And dang. I'm dying to know what's Chester's part in all of this. o.o Lovely update. Thank you!

From: ninja

Date: 2019-01-07

Chapter: ?

Oh dear!!!!!!! Poor Brad, I hope he'll manage to stop this habbit.

And I'm curious about what he told Chester. hehe. I can't wait for a plot twist *smiiiiirks*

From: hattu

Date: 2019-01-05

Chapter: ?

Poor Brad!! Really curious what the hell happened to him?!

Kudos to Mike and his patience, I would die! Just standing there, not knowing what happend, not knowing what you can do to help. And even more nerve wrecking, knowing that Chester seems to know what’s up.

So I really admire Mikes strength!


I hope all the love andcaring helps Brad thru! Hopefully he will let Mike in at some point...or is Mike unknowingly part of the problem?


Whatever it is I am looking forward to read more!

Love your way of describing things. And you ability to hold up the secret for soo long.

Please keep going!!


Greetz

Hattu

From: ninja

Date: 2018-12-29

Chapter: ?

I'm glad Brad is talking again and that he's not going back to his eating disorder again, or maybe another version of a eating disorder; I don't know. It's SO good. I love this! You always write so well!

From: Rivver

Date: 2018-12-21

Chapter: ?

Damn. I feel like all I ever say is 'poor Brad' while reading this story. But...POOR BRAD. So glad he has Mike and Anna to help him through this...whatever it is, and being so supportive and caring and just...exactly what Brad needs at the moment. Lots of love, and lots of patience. I don't even know how Mike can be so patient. I'd be dying to know what triggered this strange, worrying behavior. And knowing Chester knows...I'd be trying to get it out of him every way possible. I'm so curious! And at least Mike knows now that the 'fucked up habits' Elisa was mentioned had nothing to do with the bulimia since she didn't even know about it. So what was she talking about? I'm so glad Brad has not fallen back into that, by the way. But it's still super worrying he doesn't even care enough to eat. Don't even want to think about how he'd be doing without the Shinoda's care. Also worrying is, how little self esteem he has. Blaming all on himself. Something must've happened for him to feel that way and I'm dying to know. Lovely update! Can't wait for more.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-12-20

Chapter: ?

Gosh. Poor Brad. I don't think I've ever felt so badly for him in any other story. He seems so sad. And...so it's not over Elisa. At least not directly. I need to know what all this has to do with Chester. You're killing me here! Every time Chester's name is brought up, Brad has this knee-jerk reaction and I want to know why.


I'm so glad that Mike is not pushing though. He's being so sweet and patient, much better than I think I could do. I love that he's helping Brad in all the little ways...making sure he eats, and making sure he has stuff from his house and having him join family time. He's a good friend here, even when Brad freaks out.


I love this bit with them on the bed talking. It's so innocent and honest and I think this is the most we've heard Brad talk in this entire story. It's nice to hear his voice and get a good look at his point of view. I get where he's feeling some guilt over stringing Elisa along, but obviously that's not what's making him be so down.


My guess it IS Chester...maybe he made a pass at Chester and was shot down? Or something happened between them and Chester said, no way, we can't do this? I don't know. Or maybe it's nothing like that...maybe you'll surprise us with something totally different. Just hurry! :)

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-12-20

Chapter: ?

It's a good sign that Brad is talking more now, and even tells Mike more than just short answers to questions, but I REALLY want to know what's Chester's role in all this.


Also it's good that Mike and Anna motivate Brad to not stay inside all day, and assure him that he can stay with them as long as he needs.


Please update soon, I need answers :)

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-12-10

Chapter: ?

Yeah, I hate the feeling when I see an update and now that I can't read it instantly :( And yes, I excuse him, barely xD


On with the chapter! Oh I love that Ches knows something. You know I love all drama, lol. But he does have to tell. Or Brad has to tell. Or Brad has to give the permission to tell. I do understand why he doesn't want to. Personal stuff is still personal even if you tell it to someone or have shared it with them. Breaking Brad's trust would cause even worse so... yeah. Poor cupcake! But talking at least some is a good sign <3 Ah, thank you. That was lovely.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-12-09

Chapter: ?

This didn't help at all! Now I'm really, really confused. Please, just update soon so I can know what on earth is going on. Like, I get that Chester doesn't want to tell something personal, I really do. But when someone's well being is involved...idk. It's such a gray area. And what could have happened? Something between him and Brad or is it something Chester saw/found out? So many theories...you'd think I was insane if I listed them out lol and they're probably all wrong. I'll have to wait for more information.


I am super relieved that Brad is not struggling with his eating disorder again. That would have been terrible. So now it's more like, depression? Or maybe not that deep. Maybe like when you hit a valley in life, and everything seems to fall apart at once.


I'm ready for Dave and Joe to chime in on all this now and I hope Brad will open up more. Hearing him talk was really nice and that he ate without too much fuss. Waaaaiiiit.....maybe something DID happen between him and Chester, and that's why he's listening to LP. So he can hear Chester's voice? Hmmmm.


Okay, update soon! Loving the story and the suspense.

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-12-09

Chapter: ?

Really good chapter, thanks :)


Maybe Brad is in love with Chester, and Chester knows, and that's why he didn't want to tell Mike himself? Chester wants Brad to tell Mike, and he feels like it's not his place to tell anyone? Or maybe it's something completely different? Questions everywhere...


Please update soon!

From: Rivver

Date: 2018-12-08

Chapter: ?

Yaaay! Brad's talking! That's defnitely a step on the right direction. Although I'm now very curious about what's going on between him and Chester, and I sooo want Mike to get that info, cuz since this story is in his POV then I means that I get to know too. x) Anyway, it's clear Chester knows something, so unless Brad gives a step ahead and starts talking more, I'm on the belief he should tell Mike, or encourage Brad to tell him, because if Brad's in risk of falling back into those harmful old habits, then they need all the information they can get so they can trully help him. Also, love Anna in this. She's such an understanding and calming presence. And she seems to have that effect on Brad. Such an interestting chapter. Can't wait for more!

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