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Part of me by halvlang

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From: hattu

Date: 2018-04-29

Chapter: ?

Sorry for taking so long to review.

God this was hard to read! Totally get where Mike is coming from just wished he wouldn’t try to keep everybody else out of it.

Bless Brad to know his friend! And also for not letting go but gently „forcing“ him to open up! Glad he is there for Mike!


And woohoo! For making this something chaptered! Can’t wait to read more! Please please keep going!


Thank you!

Hattu

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-04-27

Chapter: ?

This cut right to the heart. You did it well. I could feel Mike's emotions every step of the way. And this: “I just… I miss him so much that it hurts and then sometimes I need to come here. I need to talk to him" ....I so get that. I really, really do. I think we all do.


And when he was thinking about how it doesn't seem real Chester is gone sometimes, I get that as well. Just like I'm sure we all go through that feeling even still. Will that ever go away? I don't know.


I'm glad Brad is there. I'm glad he knows his friend well enough to know where to find him.


I think it's great you're working on a chapter story, even if it's a short one. You have my full support :) I wish you all the best of luck, I'm sure you'll do it well.

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-04-27

Chapter: ?

I'm supposed to be working. But instead I'm here reading and crying. But I did chuckle at the headline example... Poor Mikey :(((( <3 Thank you, lovely start. Can you say lovely when it makes your heart hurt? Dunno. Anyhow.

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