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In My Remains by SonataNocturne

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From: Violet Raven

Date: 2018-01-20

Chapter: 2

Once again, sorry about the mistake :DDD


The second chapter is great. I could almost sense his terror when Mike entered the house and saw the blood. I think the worst thing about the attack is that they don't know WHY.


Also, Mike is secretly in love with Brad? Or well, not exactly 'secretly' since Rob knows. But it's one-sided. Brad is straight and has a wife. I assume that Brad doesn't know about Mike's feelings for him?


Update soon please! <3

From: iamnobody

Date: 2018-01-14

Chapter: 1

I can't wait to see how this develops! The way you introduced the plot, and all the mystery behind it, is really well done.


BTW, the "Holy shit fuck" line from Chester toward the end, was perfect for his character.


Also, I thought it was funny when Rob answered his phone when Mike called him. Cause I remember in an interview with Brad, Chester and Mike where they were playing the bandmate game, and they said Rob never checks his phone XD

From: Violet Raven

Date: 2018-01-14

Chapter: 1

Echm. So first you torture Chester in 'Lost in the echo' (and mentaly in 'Nervous Wreck' too), then Mike in 'White Noise' and Rob in 'Nobody can save me' - and now Brad too? :'DDD Srsly gurl.


The start looks promising. True drama, you trademark as I can see. I'm curious about what the hell could happen. And I pity Mike, he seems to take it worse than the rest. And I'm scared of the state Brad's house will be in.


"Are you daft? I just told you he doesn't remember what happened." < That line cracked me tho. :D

From: halvlang

Date: 2018-01-14

Chapter: 1

That’s a promising start to some drama :D I liked it, especially how much they all care about Brad - even though it doesn’t seem to help right now. I actually don’t even know if I want him to remember or not... it sounds seriously bad, whatever it was that happened to him...

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