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Temptation by Nikiyah Caye

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From: nachteule

Date: 2015-04-07

Chapter: 4

This chapter was so sweet, they're falling for each other so quickly! I have to say though, as much as I liked this chapter, I'm so fricken excited for the next one! Hello Chester and hello Mark, you say? I can't wait!

From: wz

Date: 2015-04-07

Chapter: 4

That was nice and comforting, it made me feel right into the story. Mike seems to have stronger feelings now, what will he do next?

From: nab

Date: 2015-04-06

Chapter: 4

Hit..I meant to write hit, not hot. Extremely helpful autocorrect :/

From: nab

Date: 2015-04-06

Chapter: 4

Can Anna be any more adorable? I love how sweet and strong she is. How confident, yet vulnerable at the same time. And I melted at Mike's 'speech', what I would do *sigh*. We get to meet Chester soon. Can't wait for that. Mike doesn't know what's gonna hot him. Haha. Rated

From: nab

Date: 2015-03-31

Chapter: 3

Have I told you how much I love you? I really...and I mean REALLY miss these type of romance. And now we get to meet Chester. Yeah. Rated

From: wz

Date: 2015-03-31

Chapter: 3

It was nice to see Chester appear in here, he and Mike are very close but what Mike feels for Anna is growing increasingly. I wonder if she'll ever have the same for him.

From: nachteule

Date: 2015-03-30

Chapter: 3

You know, I read the first chapter of this when it first went up, and I have no clue why I didn't review it. I know why I didn't review the second chapter. Because I'm lazy and so far behind. But, I'm here now to review.


Ah, romance. How I've missed *WELL-WRITTEN* romance stories on this site. There are a lot of romance stories I guess, but not a lot at the moment that make me excited to see an update. And that is what yours is.


I love the instant connection that they had, and I absolutely LOVED Anna's conversation with Mark in this chapter. Good girl. That was awesome. More awesome was Mike hanging up on his when he heard how he was speaking to her. Where are the blokes like that hiding in the real world, hey?


So anyway, I'm really sorry I didn't review this until now. Hopefully I can keep up from now on :) Rated.

From: nab

Date: 2015-03-25

Chapter: 2

Holy Shinoda that was amazing. I haven't read something like this in such a long time. I miss romance *sigh*. My favorite part was when Mike noticed that Anna was having second thoughts, and yet he didn't push her. And the line just before the kissed... Oh my goodness. I am falling for this pair. Glad they didn't go any further, cause then Anna will have a lot of guilt in her hands. Break it off with Mark!!! Rated, and wished I have read this sooner.

From: nab

Date: 2015-03-03

Chapter: 1

I love it. Mark is an idiot. And he only has himself to blame if he loses Anna

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2015-02-22

Chapter: 1

Oh I loved this! First of all, I really like Mike/Anna as a pairing in stories. And I love love love sexy confident Mike O.o I can't wait for the next chater, update soon!

From: wz

Date: 2015-02-21

Chapter: 1

Proof no one can resist him Hahaha amazing story, I liked it very much.

From: Mikey boy

Date: 2015-02-21

Chapter: 1

Wow, before I start reviewing, I want to say that I'm literally squealing from excitement because of this!!! This is just... Wow, I don't even know what to say... First of all, I want to let you know that I absolutely love this, Anna and Mike have always been my favorite couple, and I can't even begin to say how much I love them. <3<3 And this is precisely why I absolutely loved the first chapter! I haven't been here for a very long time either, so that's a very beautiful way to sort of get back again. So, on the chapter, I loved your descriptions of your characters, your writing is absolutely flowing, and really easy to follow. I gotta say that, yeah, I find it SO hard to imagine Anna or Mike being with another person, but well, what would I be reading now if things weren't a little bit dramatic? I guess you can imagine how happy I was when you introduced Mike, and I loved their first encounter. I'm sorry I'm not being so detailed right now, I'm just way too excited for words... Thank you SO much for writing this, really, I can't wait for more!!! It's rated 10, great job on this, and hopefully you'll update soon!

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