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Bennoda - The Way I See It by Emma Shinoda

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From: Nikiyah Caye

Date: 2014-08-04

Chapter: 1

I absolutely adored this. Your writing is something to be admired. Thank you for sharing (:

From: Kaph

Date: 2014-08-03

Chapter: 1

I enjoyed reading of chester and his words. I can't write english too good if not when my friend is with me and I ask for instant translation. sorry that I sound bad, but I try to learn english by doing myself not like before. the story tells me about a crush of chester on mike romance or not. I think the same with the person under me. we can't know the reality but for me reading fanfiction of them is important. I can make things relate to life and imagine how they are. nice job!

From: ErikaLPF

Date: 2014-08-03

Chapter: 1

Hi Emma,


I must review this beucause I really liked it, Chester's words are lovely and you can understand his feelings just reading your words


Love,

Erika

From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-08-03

Chapter: 1

That's something I believe in.

From: nab

Date: 2014-08-03

Chapter: 1

That was beautiful. And I'm glad you put the disclaimer. Cause while reading it, I was fooled into thinking it was actually Chester talking. You're an amazing author. Rated 200 if I could, but LPF only allows 10. Love it! And thank u for writing it.

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2014-08-03

Chapter: 1

Just a word: perfect story. Well written, the best story on their bond. No fangirl, not fancy, just the two of them ...

I do not know what else to say, great job.

Paula

From: Papercutie

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

One word for this fic. Beautiful :) <3

From: Hailey

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

The best about being fans is that we don't know anything about the lives they have, all we do is assume with fanfics. Some day I wonder what secrets they hold behind what they show. ;-) But we would never know! We know they are best friends. :-)

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

mike loves you too ♡ best friends!!

From: nothing.nowhere

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

I honestly have no and yet lots of words for this beautifully written one shot. This is exactly how I always truly pictured Bennoda to be. This was perfectly written and totally on spot. It definitely shows a point and it's purpose. I absolutely loved this and reading it. This was written so smoothly, I can't even describe it! This is of course rated 10 and added to my favorites!

From: Mikey boy

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

I... I have no words... This is just... So beautiful. I mean, it is EXACTLY what I've always thought of them two, to me Bennoda has nothing to do with a romantic relationship, it's the unique bond between Chester and Mike that is simply pure and amazing! Back on Chester's words, those are poetic, but at the same time so real and natural. The whole story did seem like it was real! I mean, what's not to love about Mike? His talents are incredible, but besides that, he has a great heart with lots of love and respect, he's genuine in everything he does. All what was written here, are my perspective as well, my own thoughts. It was like you were writing my thoughts for a while, and I absolutely loved that! And I do feel the love Chester mentioned for Mike myself - something I might never explain completey - but it's something that I know that's for sure in my heart. That goes for Chester, of course, that goes for them both, because what they represent, is the greatest example of a true friendship <3 There's no need to say how much the last line touched me, there were way too many emotions throughout the story, that made my heart beat so fast, but particularly the last one. It made me so glad and it made my day! It's amazing how you found the right words and put them in such a wonderful way, told by Chester. I love this poetry with all my heart, cause Mike and Chester's friendship is so beautiful, it's amazing, it's pure and perfect and it's... Flawless <3

Thank you for writing this, rated 10 and always looking forward to reading more from you. :)

From: wz

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

Loved it, describes the friendship and that little spark two people have which makes them bond on another level, the pretty much are the closest friends we can see, and it's very lovely. I like that you wrote this in a different style, it takes you right into the speech. If you'd like to write more like this one, I'd be very very happy to read and support it. Great job <3

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-08-02

Chapter: 1

Oh no why am I crying in Chick-Fil-A? Curse you, Emma, for being such a talented writer hahaha it was so beautiful <3 now I must distance myself from people before I become a crying mess. Just wow...it seemed so realistic, like it really was Chester's view on it. I believe they do share a unique bond, for I've never seen two friends act as they do with each other. I want a friendship like they have, but they have pushed so many boundaries to achieve such a close relationship. It takes sacrifice, which a lot of us won't do. Their occupation does help too. They are a team and they wouldn't perform so well without their friendship. This was stunning. I was blown away by your writing once again and I'm so so happy that you write on this site. Defintely going in my favorites. Thank you for writing this!

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