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Remember by malaiyas

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From: Phoebalina

Date: 2008-03-19

Chapter: 1

Being a Bennoda girl (like half the members on here) I imagined it as Mike speaking. Until the end I just assumed Chester left for some unknown reason, but my eyes became watery when it said "I stare down at your name written on the stone below me". Seriously, that killed me. I envy your writing skills, I really should just get on with my Bennoda.

From: crazypuglady

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Date: 2007-11-11

Chapter: 1

You are an amazing writer and have a gorgeous way with words. I absolutely loved this. It was heart-wrenching and flawlessly written. The last line was simple, and yet striking. All in all, this was extremely impressive to say the least.

From: Barush

Date: 2007-11-11

Chapter: 1

Aw, that was sad but beautiful. I imagined Chester&Mike, I'm a sucker for Bennoda <3 Loved it.

From: LP_babe

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Date: 2007-11-11

Chapter: 1

This was quite beautiful. I love the language and how this story has been expressed. I enjoyed it<3

From: Lee (logged out)

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Date: 2007-11-10

Chapter: 1

Wow. This was beautifully written. I loved the language, it was so poetic and truly captivated me. The ending was perfect too. I felt like the whole story was meant to make your eyes well up and then that final line make you cry. I don't know, but you almost made me cry. xD But that's a good thing. Great work.

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