Reviews
Sacrament by FyrMaiden
From: BreakingtheHabitLPfan
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Date: 2004-12-11
Chapter: 1
Oh wow...thats deep...i almost cried...*applauds you* Very nice!
~~* i AM Breaking The Habit *~~
From: Nas
Email: trinity_76va@yahoo.com
Date: 2004-12-10
Chapter: 1
Wow....you write so well. It was so complicated but so simple at the same time. That was really good! Keep doing you!
One Love
Nas aka Ex.
From: BloodStainedRazorBlade
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Date: 2004-12-10
Chapter: 1
abosolutly beautiful.
From: Hmaddox1
Date: 2004-12-10
Chapter: 1
I am speachless. Not too many fics do that to me but yours always seem to.
This was simply beautiful.
From: conz
Email: kimismysanta@bennoda!sex.com
Date: 2004-12-10
Chapter: 1
And you say smut's not your thing. Kind of ironic as to how this is called Sacrament. You need to get yourself to confession for lying! Ha. And that was the lamest joke on this side of the planet.
Mmm. Loved this. Gotta look at it on two levels. Appreciate it on two levels. Level one: Nix's pensive gaze into the distance as he unknowingly poses for a beautiful shot of his back. Tattoos, courteousy of Mike, and lets leave it at that. Level two: lust on simmer with all those delicious undertones that complete a FRY-- FyrMaiden classic.
From: automne
Date: 2004-12-10
Chapter: ?
tasteful & short. just another tale from the one and only. very nicely done, kim. and you know how much i dislike phoenix.
From: shinobi
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Date: 2004-12-10
Chapter: ?
Christ. Mike and Dave is my OTP so seeing someone writing it was like Christmas come early for me. We need more of it.
That aside, this was a beautiful little piece. I love how fragmentatad it was, yet it wasn't as it flowed so well from one paragraph to the next. I love this style of writing and you seem to have grasped this unique knack of turning it into something detailed yet without too many words (if that even begins to make sense!)
All from Mike helping to design Phi's tattoos.. I love your imagination, and the way that through that short piece you left so many pretty images soaring through my mind.
I know I've said it before countless times, but you really DO have such power in your words :)
Loved it, it left me breathless and strangely made me smile :)
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From: MissB
Date: 2004-12-12
Chapter: 1
Damn, it's hot in here! That was so beautifully written. I wish I had your talent for words. And Tattoos! Hell, yeah. Sorry, for this rather unprofessional review but I'm still a bit hot.