Beautiful

Brought tears to my eyes which says a lot, I don't cry

Well done.

shit...

that was so damn fucking good...

just found your story recentl while skiping through and yes, i must say, this was a remarkable piece of work.

good story, really.

congratulations!

um..what to say..I liked the sarcasm..

wow.

there are quite a few great stories on rape and such, but i have to say that this one is awesome. keep up the good work.

It's sad...but I like it...

You're a very good writer!!

*whimper*

I've nothing to say...that was absolutely amazing. I loved how you altered between what happened and Chester's current state and just...wow.

I especially loved the way Chester would have given himself to Mike, only Mike had took...that made me cry.

Absolutely amazing. I'm sorry I can't leave a better review.

beautiful... how often is a rape fic referred to as beautiful? {scratches head} oh well.

well written. most def. and i love the way it switches between Chester's current state and the actual rape. it's sad in the way that they could have been happy, if only mike had asked...

loved it! another great one!

wow u got good writing skills!!

whoo......*stunned* you're such a good writer....

*gasp* So sad!

Depressing. Yet, beautifully so.

Good Job.

wow, i don't know what to say. that was so fucking amazing, very well written.

-whimper-

That was.... o.o .... .... ... ... .. .... okay. I suck at this.

I'm not quite sure whast to say. I'm torn between liking this story because it's so brilliantly written and hating it because it involves someone hurting Chester. The way you write makes it so real and it hurts me to think that he may have actually felt like that. That bit about how he would have given himself willingly is just so painful. OK. I'm crying. I'll stop now