OMG!!!! Dude, i totally love Linkin Park but here i am ready Fan fics about them..*bows her head in shame* anyway...this was AWESOME!!! keep writing! Bai!!......(>'.'<)KIRBY!!!!

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awesome

KEWLIEZ!!!

that was pretty sweet! I luv this fanfic, is really sweet, so tender n soft, I luv that stuff!

plz, update more^.^

So so good, I luv it. Update soon please!!!

Eiiiiiiiiiii! Omg I didn't see your dedication! OMG! I love you Megan!!!!!!!!!!!!! You just made my day!!!! ^_^

PLEASE UPDATE!

that was so prettyful ::tear:: dat chick need to die...eham..anywhose, i cant wait till the next chapter, hurry and update

*claps* bravo hunny, another great chapter :)

although you may want to get it beta'd as i did find a few mistakes dotted about, but other than that you did a wondermiffle job! *smooch*

*dances*

I was in the chapter, I was in the chapter!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Hahaha I love you Megan, you and your writing kicks ass!

Mmm boy smut. yum yum yummmmmmmmmmmmm!

<333

Very nice chapter, but I do have a few suggestions and some helpful criticism.

1) You might want to space between lines, for example, when you write this:

“Putri. It will be fine. Thankyou!” Mike jumps into his seat and drives his car to the garage. Chester gurgles a whimper in the backseat.

“Mike?” His voice was weak and his teeth chatter as he is drawn back into consciousness.

“I’m hear Chaz, don’t worry. Everything is alright. I promise.”

It would be easier to read if it was written like this:

“Putri. It will be fine. Thankyou!” Mike jumps into his seat and drives his car to the garage. Chester gurgles a whimper in the backseat.

“Mike?” His voice was weak and his teeth chatter as he is drawn back into consciousness.

“I’m hear Chaz, don’t worry. Everything is alright. I promise.”

I find that it is easier to follow the story that way. The other way, you have paragraphes clashing with eachother and it makes it difficulf to follow the story without getting lost in the words.

2) Just watch out on some of your spelling and grammar. You didn't have many mistakes, but the few that sometimes pops up, throws you off for about a second.

Anyway, the chapter was beautifully written. You did very well with the scence between Mike and Chester. You describe things beautifully. All the description comes out in such a lovely and easily flowed way. ^.^ Keep it like that.

I hope you tok my suggestions in a positive way, they were not ment to be rude, they were ment to be helpful. Anyway, update when you can! ^.^ I look forward to the next update! ^.^ Your doing a lovely job! Keep it up!

good gosh THAT was HOT !

I really like how you ended this chap. Good job.

that was so cute!!!!!! and hot!!!!!!!! but mostly cute cause at the end with the whole thing and the awwwwwww and what song is he writing? thank god chaz went to mike's..... *sighs* update, I gotta see what the song is!

Wee, this is fun. good job so far.

Update! Please? I want to know what happends next!

First off, I love how you title the chapters! ^.^ very very unique. Anyway, I said I would read the story, and well, here I am! Sitting at my computer desk in awe!

Wonderful start with the story. And you have so much description! I love it. You can feel the characters emotions, which are portrayed very nicely. The mood with Chester and Mike is comforting, but ina tense way. ^.^ It's wonderful. Keep up the great work and I look forward to an update.

Thanx to all the reviews, yall make me feel special....Props to Puts! heheh You have read it like three times! I am nearly finished Chapter 4 and i promise that this one is a long one. It has also made me very tired @ school, cos i can't stop writing it and i end up staying up till 12 writing......anyhoo! Hopefully by monday! bye yall!

You know what I already think of all this! Hahaha

I love you shoe! I can't wait for the next chap! Keep writing and keep me updated!!

So so good, I luv it. I hope chester's okay. Update soon please!!!