I like your story and I saw your pic if u have more pics can u e-mail them to me thanks

:'( OMFG that was so sad! oh..depression...

wow...*tears* i dun wanna read the rest, depressing...Hehe nah it's fine, inspiring though. but it's fine, good story

eh... it was different. ill give ya that, but it needed to me a little more detailed and a lot longer. its a good plot, but it was just cut too short, ya know? good job though

Your fic has this new flavour...very special. Most of the people tend to show Chester as a cute, pure, defenseless angel. I love him as a demon!

I also love the fact that this demon is not evil, only of a different nature.

I can't wait to read the next part of this story!

Em.A.

he didn't jump in front of it did he? he's not gonna give his life is he? there's not any slash in this is there? *confused* UPDATE......NESS!!!!! so the Evee is no longer confused

This story is good I like it Update when you can

pouting...shivering...sniffing...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Pleaseeeeeee nooooooo!!!! You are hurting them!!!SOBSOBSOB!!! Oh... but the big bad soldier demon called them lovers... Are they? Will they?

The first chapter was great too! Poor Mike! lol...

My friend I'm really enjoying your fic. I think you could use a beta reader, just to smooth the text a bit, make it flows like an angel's flight!;)

Go ahead! Update it as soon as possible!! :D

Em.A.

it's very different I like it though update when you can

It's different lol but interesting

Yes I read this one, and what I have to say is.... I need to read more in order to give a verdict, (shifty eyes) yeah... that's it.