Reviews
Chocolate Covered Chester Techniques by .ray
From: LPD
Date: 2010-06-12
Chapter: 1
Amazing! Totally breathtaking, hot, funny, beautiful! I keep reading your fics over and over again cause they are just way too awesome. I just wish we'd have more authors like you instead of this trash. :( We need you back Ray!
From: Bennoda >_< Psycho
Date: 2010-01-22
Chapter: 1
So Mike gave his virginity away as a birthday present....?
Haha gr8 job i loved it!! = )
From: Bridgett
Date: 2009-01-20
Chapter: 1
I just saw my comment from almost two or so years ago! I knew I read it once, hehe. :)
From: Bridgett
Date: 2009-01-20
Chapter: 1
What I liked about it is that I think you got all of the character's right on. Each of the guys have their own personality, and you depicted theirs well.
I love the Bennioda love! It was great. :)
From: Andie17
Date: 2007-12-12
Chapter: 1
God!...Cant breathe... Hot...Amazing!
That´s a Game a would love to play...
Chaz is the hottest guy on earth...
From: Bridgett
Date: 2006-01-02
Chapter: 1
That was a really awesome story and I think a lot of people enjoyed it. I know I did.. X)
From: Jennifer
Email:
Date: 2005-09-27
Chapter: 1
Just the right amount of humor and sex to make it perfect...wonderful job!!
From: Bitty
Email:
Date: 2005-08-17
Chapter: 1
lmao great ending man!
the story was really good, very well written..well geez all ur fuckin stories that i've read are like that!! great job!
ttyl,
~Bitty~
From: kelly
Email:
Date: 2005-03-09
Chapter: 1
That story was hot!!!...wonderful
From: ASiANCHiKNXTDOOR
Email:
Date: 2005-01-08
Chapter: 1
AWW.. I WANT A SEQUEL!! NOOO.. LET ME REPHRASE... I NEEEEEEEEEED A SEQUEL!! HAHHA I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOVE THISS!!!! IT IS JZ SOOO AMAZING!!!
From: Alexia
Email:
Date: 2005-01-03
Chapter: 1
A drunk Joe and dave nice touch I applaud!!
From: LPsuperFAN
Email:
Date: 2004-12-11
Chapter: 1
hey that was so hot and i know you had fn writing it. keep at it forever and give it all you got if you can write more stories like this you'll have a lot more people going to this website just for this story.
From: Sparky
Email:
Date: 2004-11-22
Chapter: 1
That was so awesome. Well done ;)
I loved it how the other guys herad them and were listening outside the room and giggling drunk! And that they took it well, to say the least.
From: *~~Arwen~~*
Date: 2004-11-06
Chapter: 1
the rules says u can't update more then one story i one day. but it also says u can add and update the same story in less then a day. read the rules again. and read them closely.
love ya and lp too,
*~~Arwen~~*
From: Charley. :D
Date: 2004-10-20
Chapter: 1
man! i was about to go to bed, and a friend linked me this. i'm SO glad i read it, and now i'm all breathy. i LOVED it. maybe because i love chocolate. maybe because i love chester. maybe because chester was covered in chocolate. whatever the reason, i LOVED it.
<3charley
From: i-own-your-face
Date: 2004-10-20
Chapter: 1
that was...
soooo...
hot...
oh my i'm spent. you need a really big hug for that. now i want some chocolate really bad...<3
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From: AmplifiedSpeculation
Date: 2019-04-17
Chapter: 1
I know that I'm late as hell, but I can say that I absolutely love this. Mike giving his virginity away as a birthday present? (mind blows) Hope you're doing good now, Ray. :)