Well...what happened to Mike? That is an awful cliffhanger! I gotta say, I think I'd be scared to have sex with an android, especially with the android doing the penetrating. My brain goes to the worse case scenario of them going into overdrive and not stopping and people get hurt. Gosh, I know that's sick and wrong.

Anyway.

I hope Mike's okay! And despite him being an android, they have lovely chemistry with the jokes and taunts and concern. And clearly their sexual chemistry is there, too, despite Mike's....lack of being able to finish? I'm curious what happened.

Heroine. Jeez. That's a massive jump - sober to heroine. I gotta say, I cringe at "Mike" getting rough with Chester and slapping him. Yelling at him. Chester bought this android to have someone love him, and it's already being violent with him. *sigh* the irony is awful. But, I think it's great they can have a real conversation about music, and obviously Mike is being somewhat of a companion. I fear Chester's going to be very let down by the end of this story.

Chapters 3 and 4

I'm glad he got his android. But poor Chester's so awkward with him. I kinda like that he's "Shinoda" lol it's funny. But I love the bit with the blue turning to hazel, even for just a little bit. And then when they watched the movie. Chester's consistent answer of "whatever" is really funny. Poor Shinoda, having to figure things out from such a generic answer XD Sorry I'm late in reading/reviewing, life gets busy!

This is for chapter 2

I totally know the feeling of wanting something so badly, and not having the funds to buy it. Bills and rent come first. That's just part of being an adult. I feel his pain. But. Gotta say I wasn't quite expecting this to go how you wrote it. I think there are some interesting points:

The robot is used. Not new. Not made especially for Chester. I think that adds something. This robot will have a history. Maybe even a memory of that past life. Or maybe even some PTSD. Wouldn't that be interesting.

Brad said there was damaged, but he's fixed. But, is he really? I'd love to see some scars show up because how cool is that? A robot with scars - emotional and physical.

This robot is supposedly cold. Which is the opposite of what Chester is looking for/needing. I'm seriously ready to see love transform this "cold" robot into a loving partner. Or at least I hope that's the way this goes! I'm a helpless romantic. I love love and watching love come into existence is one of my favorite things.

I'm glad you decided to write another story! I've just read the first chapter. Again, you have such a poetic note to your writing, which is something my writing lacks. I'm always amazed by people who have that flare to their work.

I feel for Chester and this...blue that's always around. I was actually really happy when Talinda came in and suddenly there was this second, more lovely element to be seen and felt in his life. No more loneliness or silence. It made it even harder when it was gone just as quickly as it came, so good job on that.

I've seen both the movies you referenced, so I'm curious what kind of mix this will have.