Reviews
Hey Man, Nice Shot by Emma Shinoda
From: mermaid_life87
Date: 2019-10-07
Chapter: 1
Wow...poor Brad :( lol I pictured Joe for whatever reason. I love the hitman’s logic. If someone is paying x amount of dollars to see you dead, you did *something* wrong haha Interesting way to look at it/justify it.
As always, your writing is on point. <3 Nice job!
Also...sorry you’re struggling again. *hugs* I went through a little rough patch myself recently. Hang in there!
From: lpfan503
Date: 2019-10-05
Chapter: 1
For whatever reason, Rob came to mind as the assassin. I could see his lack of visible emotion being an asset in this business. I felt the emotional detachment in your writing - didn't even care that Brad was the victim, as the assassin didn't have any sort of emotional connection to him at all. It was all just a mundane days work. Well done.
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2019-10-05
Chapter: 1
Wow, this was dark. But really well-written. Part of me wishes he didn't shoot, and he found out that Brad really was keeping a hostage in his apartment, but I'm sick and wrong like that XD So the main character was Mike in my head. Not sure who you were thinking of. It's a bummer we don't know why or who ordered this to happen.
Great one shot. I recognized the title immediately.
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From: JellyfishLP
Date: 2019-10-07
Chapter: 1
This little oneshot was great! It was surprising, dark, and well-written; I don't think I've read anything like this on this page before. For whatever reason, I pictured Mike as the assassin. I loved the way you described Brad as such a normal person, and yet he had done something that resulted in him having to die. Well done!