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Dirty Deeds by mermaid_life87

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From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2019-04-11

Chapter: 1


From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-04-10

Chapter: 1

Oh boy, this is such a cool little story! It shows a different Mike than how he is usually written, which I absolutely loved!


I liked how devious he was in seducing Chester, even after he had told Mike that he was with Rob. And then the ending, when Rob walked in on them, so good! Also, I love that this was just a one shot, because it stopped at the very best moment. Of course, this could be a chaptered story, but I think I prefer it as a one shot, well done :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-04-10

Chapter: 1

Oh my. I read this yesterday and...gotta say, your writing is great. You really said it lot in such a little space, which always amazes me when people are able to do that. I'm such a rambler. But! I was shocked seeing Mike be so vicious and self-serving. Not the usual take on him, which is cool. Seeing new sides to people is always interesting. I feel for Rob! And Chester gave, like, no resistance lol like, come on, man! But he is Mike, so, Bennoda has to happen :) Thank you for sharing! I'm ready for your next chapter story update too :D

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-04-10

Chapter: 1

Wow, I love the way you wrote Mike, so devious and boy wasn’t he on a mission! And don’t get me started on Chester because wow, those two together is delish in this story! Thank you for sharing this piece of hotness, was an absolute joy to read ❤️

From: Devils_little_sister

Date: 2019-04-09

Chapter: 1

Hi there,

I really enjoyed this and wished it wasn't that short. (That's what she said xD)

I love narcissistic!Mike. I am also a huge Mike Fangirl just like lpfan503. I've been ever since, but I always loved picturing Michael as an arrogant doucheburger =)

I am not sure if this is a classic slutty!Chester we are seeing here. I think he's more naive and has a huge crush on his bandmate. Maybe Mike's decision to bang the singer was not a spontaneous one. Maybe he prepared Chester for this moment over the last couple of weeks with small sexual hints.

Uh I like this and I would also enjoy reading more of it. So if you thought about making a multi-chapter out of this, do it!!!

Very well done!

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-04-09

Chapter: 1

Its so nice to see an evil Mike!! I love it, this was short but entertaining and fresh.... is there a minimal possibility that this could continue? It would be nice to read more of it... If you decide to keep it as a standalone it is also worth it. Thanks for sharing!

From: hearts.on.fire

Date: 2019-04-09

Chapter: 1

Uggh, I love a mischievous Mike. He's so daring and bold and doesn't care about what anybody thinks. He wants what he wants and he's going to get it. So hot, I loved it. And Chester is like putty in his hands!! It was short and sweet and I would leave to see what happens next, but it is also perfect as a standalone!! Loved it, excellent job!

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-04-09

Chapter: 1

Evil Mike! Disapproving Brad! Slutty Chester! Innocent Rob! Haha, you packed a lot into a small amount of words. I'm a HUGE Mike girl. It takes a lot to make me dislike Mike. In fact, if Mike is unlikable at all, I usually can't read the story because I love Mike so much. BUT, I understand Chester not being able to say no to Mike. Haha, even if it's premeditated and that makes Mike an awful person, I still chuckled at his brazenness. But poor Rob at the end. I feel bad for him - and the fact that neither Mike nor Chester seem to care. Usually when someone cheats it's the whole "caught up in the moment" scenario, so this this was different in the fact that Mike ambushed Poor Chester, who didn't even resist. Nice job.

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