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Tranquil by Devils_little_sister

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From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-04-02

Chapter: 1

Oh man, this review comes late, because I actually wanted to review much earlier...


In a weird way, I liked this story, because it was so different from all the other stories here. Mike was so aggressive and, as you said, indeed a monster. Someone who does everything to appear like a nice guy on social media. I liked the ending when he realized they were already live on facebook and now the world could see what kind of guy he was when he attacked Chester.


Well done! Greetings from a fellow German :)

From: L.Phoenix

Date: 2019-04-01

Chapter: 1

I had no idea you were German! Your English is about as good as a few American's I know XD And ommmgggg I'm a sucker for a good, dark, twisted story! You had me all over the place! First Mike being so demanding, and then like, a little towards the end, a little soft and sweet and then BAM! Back to being all DOM and aggressive! Love it! And you gave this story to your professor??? Ballsy! GAH! I feel like this could go beyond a standalone but that's just me (I love long stories, especially when the writing is good and the story is unique, just like this :D)


Rated! I can't wait to read the next chapter of Celebrating Life! <3

From: derekbrad

Date: 2019-03-31

Chapter: 1

Oh wow I did like this a lot. Very different to see Mike in this whole other perspective 💕

From: hearts.on.fire

Date: 2019-03-29

Chapter: 1

I really liked this! You did a really good job portraying Mike as a complete... well, monster. It always throws me to see any of the guys portrayed as aggressive, but it worked well in this. You created some pretty deep characters in such a short piece! And ugh, poor Chester :(

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2019-03-29

Chapter: 1

Wow, damn! Mike is really aggressive in this!


Poor Ches. The way you wrote this was quite intriguing, and I like that you are willing to write violence, which is kind of rare in LPF. I love dark stories. Mmmph...not a Dom!Mike fan, but I like the darkness of this story. Your English is great, I wouldn't be able to tell you are German if I read this. Thank you!

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