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Little green thing by bag_full_of_stars

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From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-07-11

Chapter: 1

I liked this! I totally felt for Brad. Watching Mike hit on everyone, sheesh that would really suck. Like, straight to the heart. Ugh. But I'm glad that Mike finally came clean about it...and dang, Ches, stop coming up with bad ideas! lol I'm very happy that all the guys were accepting of Mike coming out (and Brad, too). And the little moment with Mark was a nice touch. I liked your blow job at the end, congrats on being brave enough for those waters. It's not always the easiest stuff to write.


Thank you for sharing!

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-07-09

Chapter: 1

Duuuude. Hawt. Yes, certainly. Whiii! Happy me! It was so freaking cute too! And I definitely love jealous Brad, lol.


Some capital letters missing and blah blah. Grammar is pain in the butt sometimes.

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