Okay by Umi

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From: JessLP

Date: 2017-10-03

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Oh god...

No words....

This really hurt me, it was a good read but I am crying like a baby :((

From: Ritz

Date: 2017-09-30

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I searched for a LP fan fiction site to bring me into the world where Chester is happy and saved. Bennoda fic or not. I tried to ignore your story because don't want to deal with grief and sadness but I was curious. And, I am so glad I checked your story.

This is very well written. Every word is tugging at my heart.

Don't we all wish this happened? That Mike could have sensed something was wrong and decided to check him out. Or Joe was feeling bored that morning and decided to drop by few hours earlier than what they have agreed on. Or Talinda suddenly missed him so much and decided to fly out the night before or that morning. Or that Chester did not open that bottle.

Thank you for this.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2017-09-28

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Well this was a hell of a read. Bravo, my friend. This was expertly done. Very moving. You could feel it through each paragraph. Thank you for sharing this with us. Like one of the other reviewers said, I think it's part of the coping process to think about the "what ifs" and if only someone had been there....but no one was, and we can't change that. Beautiful piece.

From: squashie

Date: 2017-09-17

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Literally sobbing right now. This is so well written, so visceral. And something that freaks me out a bit is how similar part of it is to a fic I wrote without having yet read any other fics on the topic (yours is way better than mine) that makes me realise how many of us have probably been taking the same few known details of what happened and turning them over and over in our heads and wondering "what if...?", imaging other outcomes. It's just so fucking heartbreaking. I'm really struggling with it, but writing and reading these fics helps a bit, especially when they're as good as yours is. Thank you for posting. xx *hugs*

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-07-30

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Thank you for writing this.

It made me crying but you're right we'll heal slowly.

Thank you for these words, I need it.

From: Bird Girl

Date: 2017-07-29

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I'm glad you took the time to write this. I know I've been thinking a lot about how devastated I am and I've cried plenty and now I've just been listening to all their songs on repeat. I think it's also important to remember how Mike and Talinda and his kids must be feeling too. Losing people isn't easy and sometimes it comes out of nowhere and sometimes it's hard to accept and it's easy to blame yourself. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you

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