Another multi chapter? I'm in, ready. Already rated and preparing for the next chapter. I'd like your first to end as well though, because it's amazing and i love it. Can't wait for both to make the days better.

Nice, i liked the mother son love in There. That part of Chester and his mom in the car, driving at Night was really nice. The conversation was funny and interesting.

(Chester smiled. “Maybe I get some tan, in case I don’t find any girl.”

She smiled and shrugged. “I think I don't even want to share my baby-boy.”) <- this was my first fav line. Hahaha!

After reading about Brad and his friends, i'm getting a feeling that its gonna be kinda hard for Chaz to get along real quick.

Brad was already Been whiny about that, but its an obvious reaction when someone's going to stay in your home.

I hope Brad wouldnt be an ass to Chaz though....

Anyway, my other fav line was -> “Better stay a virgin, Robert.”

I giggled at it longer then i thought i would!

Rated.

Great start.i love that you're planning on making allthe guys involved in the fic, not just Mike and Chester (although I have nothing agaibst them). I can't wait to see how Brad and Chester will bond. It'll be a sight to see. Rated

Hi there :)

There was a lot going on in this chapter. I definitely agree that it's not good to stay in an abusive relationship, so I'm glad Chester's mom was brave enough and strong enough to take her son and leave. I hope their new life will be much better.

I feel bad for Chester in the fact that he had no warning, so no chance to say goodbye to anyone. I think that would be really hard, especially if you have things that are left undone, you know?

I like that you have all the guys in this story. I'm a big believer in including everyone. Not just Mike and Chester. Not that I'm hating on Mike and Chester, I'm not, I just think it's important to give the others some love too. To give them their respected personalities and let them bring their strengths to the table of the story.

I like Joe so far in this story, he made me smile :) and Brad too. I hope he'll get along with Chester once he gets there. I'm not really familiar with Mark W. so it will be interesting to see him in a story.

Not sure I like Anna. She seemed....hmmm....pretentious. Which is ok, since we know that Mike will eventually end up with Chester. Won't he? That's what your description says, I think. Or maybe my brain autocorrected it to say that XD who knows.

I'm excited to see the first interaction between Brad and Chester. First impressions and all that fun stuff. Annnd Mike's pool sounds like the place to be. Goodness. *kicks Jason and his itty-bitty buddies out*

That's what I'm talking about.

Let the writers have the pool, children. We need to relax :)