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The End Is Just The Beginning by nachteule

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From: nab

Date: 2015-05-15

Chapter: 3

That was amazing! Holy shit you're an incredible author. What is up with Rob and Elisa? Were they the reason Chester did what he did? Argh! The suspense is killing me. Rated.

From: NatalyT

Date: 2015-05-13

Chapter: 3

brad is the main character almost and omgf you have 0 idea how much I love you for that he's like MY NUMBER 1 IN LP

From: metalidentity

Date: 2015-05-13

Chapter: 3

omg I'm so curious, who is using chester's account? what if it's really him? what if he's not actually dead or something? lisa looks like she's hiding something

From: wz

Date: 2015-05-13

Chapter: 3

No I'm serious you're the fucking master of horror.

From: wz

Date: 2015-05-13

Chapter: 3

You have to know something before I begin reviewing: I get a couple tears when shit gets real. And you do this so well I'm probably going to cry in fear as soon as chapter 4 is posted. First chapter, a real disaster, it killed me and I'm still not over the video Chester made for them to know what actually was in his mind. Getting rid of rubbish?! Poor thing.. It killed me to read and imagine his pale cheeks filled with tears.. As soon as you described how Mike pretended to make a speech made me understand there was something wrong. And it was right. He is just.. he's a homophobe. That's the main reason a homosexual would want to kill himself especially when it's a good friend they didn't want to lose respect of. As if being gay is disrespectful in any way. Mike is like those kids who can't get over diversity because they're afraid for themselves which is selfish more than self defense of their own beliefs. It was so perfect, the way you wrote. The way you described the day Chester chose to do what he felt, but despite his pain and fear, Brad was always there for him since the beginning. Was he really the only one to care this much? He's such a kind heart, he loved Chester as a true friend which is something that stupid moron of Shinoda should've learned way before Chester's first uneasiness. Brad is amazing. And as the story kept going, you wrote something that made me get tears the first time reading this.. he receives messages from his account. I mean how scary is that.. There was this post from a guy who wrote something like this about his girlfriend and I swear to god it creeped me out hard. This story went straight to my favorites after chapter 1, what the hell you're a genius and screw that movie idea thing. I want to know if it's actually Chester because the messages interact with him when he sees people. Please update.

From: Dead_Buddy

Date: 2015-05-12

Chapter: 3

I am in friggin love with this story. You make it so full of suspense. It's so unpredictable so everything I read surprises me, and I love it!!! I really really want to keep reading. Can't wait for the next update......

From: BradRockZ

Date: 2015-05-12

Chapter: 3

Greetings! :) , thank god...this time I didn't had any similar dream, phew...

Alright, that was very strange and you wanna know my thoughts?

Mmmm....at the beginning, at Brad and elisa's image in his locker, I was like, "i hope they get together again....." But when I came by the part of that footage, then I was like, "Nevermind..." chances are Brad would probably dislike her more now.

And what's Rob and Elisa hiding? The rest of my thoughts are exactly what Brad's thinking....

From: Hazle Grace

Date: 2015-05-12

Chapter: 3

Jesus fuck this is really interesting. You write it so damn well, I can feel it. I'm falling in love with Brad a little and I'm very worried about him. What the fuck is up with his friends, they're so suspicious. Lastly, CREEPY. The contacting thing is really creepy. This is really good, and I can't wait to see what happens.

From: wz

Date: 2015-05-11

Chapter: 3

Good lord I'm so late for reading this but I'll just place the rating because I'm already sure it's awesome, I'll try to find a moment tonight after work.. So late

From: Ally1040able

Date: 2015-05-11

Chapter: 3

Well, I was finally able to get my account to work again, and must I say that now that I can review this, that this is a good story! This really isn't something I've seen before, and I really must compliment you for your creativity! I don't think I could say enough about this story to express how wonderful it really is! The main thing about this story that makes it wonderful is you know easily how to show the emotions of each character. That's a very important thing when writing, and you seem to able to do it with ease! I am really looking forward to when you post another chapter!

From: nab

Date: 2015-05-10

Chapter: 2

Oh my god! That was amazing. Thrilling. Unexpected. I feel so sad for Brad. He's consumed with sadness, guilt and loss. Too bad he can't see that a lot of people cares about him.


Chester's back?!! Holy crap! I love this fic. Rated.

From: metalidentity

Date: 2015-05-06

Chapter: 2

first of all, thank you for thanking me... lol that was really nice of you, I'll definitely keep reading your stories! this one is so sad I can't find the words. the ending is damn creepy, did it really happen or Brad imagine it?

From: BradRockZ

Date: 2015-05-06

Chapter: 2

NAAAAAAAAAO!! HOW COULD I MISS THIS!?, HOW THE FUCK COULD I MISS THIS!?!?

I'm so sorry for being late, life just did something and dragged me away from this World.


On chapter 1: Michael....was such an asshole, i hated the way he was laughin at poor Chester.

And poor Brad, he witnessed the death...i hope he doesn't get in to a trauma or something.

And the scene of Chester's suicide...i imagined it in slow motion

Like you wrote, and it was awesome feeling, i forgot to breath till someone turned Brad away.

"he offed himself like a cock sucker" at this my jaw dropped and refused to be picked again for several seconds...i was all like ( how could he say that? :O)


On chapter 2: the mysterios massages, calls and 'shit is about to get real' was very much horrifying and made me hella excited but even more scary for me than was that, just today i had a dream....Brad was sitting by a grave, and his eyes were teary... O_O

From: Hazle Grace

Date: 2015-05-05

Chapter: 2

Oh my god. That's freaky as hell and I am thoroughly creeped out. Dude you write so fucking well I love it. And shut up, of course I'm going to read and support it. :) I love your writing it's amazing. It seems you are, however, going to possibly scare me to tears with this fucking story. Looking forward to the next part. (Should really not read your stuff at almost 2 am right before bed, but I seem to always do this...)

From: Dead_Buddy

Date: 2015-05-04

Chapter: 2

WHOA HOLY SHIT I AM EXCITED! Is Chester actually contacting him from the afterlife??? Oh my god!! That's so great, I love it. I love how Brad is the only one who cares about Chester because Jesus, he killed himself and everybody else isn't even mourning, they're just annoying Brad. And I also love how Chester cares so much for Brad too like he could be talking with anybody else but he chooses Brad. oH MY GOD IS THIS NOW A GHOST STORY??? Can't wait for the next update :D

From: nab

Date: 2015-05-04

Chapter: 1

How do you do this? Once again, you have amazed me with your work I will definitely be following this. I don't really like teen fic, but this is an exception.


If only. Two words that can haunt a person for life. I want to know how this tragedy will affect them as individuals and as a group. I want to know if they'll overcome it or succumb to it. Rated. And praying hard that you'll continue this soon.

From: metalidentity

Date: 2015-04-30

Chapter: ?

no why chester.. this is seriously the saddest thing ever I can't imagine a world without chester. and congrats mike, what an ass

From: Dead_Buddy

Date: 2015-04-30

Chapter: ?

This was so sad, I'm not gonna lie to you, I shed some tears. Despite the sadness though it was really really great. I know Brad doesn't want any sympathy but he's got a hell of a lot of it from me. I can't believe that Mike could be so rude and vulgar, saying Chester died like a cocksucker? He can't get away with that. I wish everybody else too would stop being like "just ignore it" and just let Brad pummel Mike to hell because UGH he deserves it so bad. But we've yet to really figure out why Chester did it, right?


Please update soon, I can't wait to read the rest of this story!


rated 10/10 :)

From: Hazle Grace

Date: 2015-04-30

Chapter: ?

Oh my fuck. Seriously? You are going to kill me. Man, that almost made me cry a little. Brad's probably gonna have some post-traumatic stress issues on top of grieving for his lost friend and dealing with his asshole friend. Wow Mike...he's really fucking bad. Definitely made me hate him. Like what the fuck, so what if he's gay? Don't be a dick about it. Stop being an arrogant jackass not everything revolves around you. I really wanted Brad to punch him because he would have deserved it. Anyway, you wrote this so fucking well. The feelings come through perfectly. I am a bit scared and extremely interested to see what comes next.

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