is mike ok? he did not act as himself.

Why didn't Mike go to rescue Chester? And who's this new character? Questions... hopefully answered in the next chapter!

Ohh now I'm curious about that weird character..

OMG again??? And who's this stranger? A dark part of Chester?

And didn't Mike run after Chester? Where's he? I need to see him rescure Chester!! Or others... IDK but I really wanna see him haha.

Wanna read the next so badly please update soon!!

Poor Chester. Just when he thought he was free, someone hurt him again.

Chester is so bad ass. Pls update soon

OMG What happened?!

What did Chester mean when he said those words? And where was he heading to?? I hope Michael would be there for him…Chaz was being impulsive…which might result in hurting himself…

God ahhh just update soon PLZ!!

UPDATE NEEDED.

Sorry that was a mini rant.. On a serious note, do you have any idea how good you write? Man the last scene with Chester's wings is pure gold. Holy crap.

Oh my gosh what?! Chester?!

It was so nice to see this story updated, I'd missed it! I'm gonna start on a random note, but... The image of Mike stroking the feathers on Chester's wings is incredibly, well, hot doesn't do it justice. Alluring? Maybe, I don't know, my vocabulary fails me here, but I love the intimacy of it all, something they share that shows their affection without having to be overly sexual. And I'm sure it was hard for Chester to let it happen, since it is such a prestigious privilege to give someone.

I'm so confused as to why Mike's demeanor changed so suddenly, I wonder what Chester said to trigger that??? I'm really hoping that Mike does care for Chester as much as he lets on, and isn't using him or leading him on, but it's hard to know. Mike is incredibly hard to read here, and it clings me into desperately wanting more of this story.

The ending was so terrible for Chester, it frustrates me because I know Chester could've smoked that guy, but it probably would've meant revealing his true form, which he can't really do... But ugh, that guy, I want to kill him for touching Chaz! Mike really needs to come back, I hate that Chester is pretty much alone now. I hope things will get better for him, and I can't wait for your next update!

Mike doesn't look of his nature. He's kind to Chester. Always sweet seeing it. :-) So sweet.

YES UPDATE THIS ONE ♡

OMG I can't believe you updated this story!!!! I love you so much!!!!

Poor Chester,I don't know why Michael leaves him all of a sudden and why Chester'd rather walk alone in the dark night than stay a little with Rob. It's pretty tragic. I wonder if Mike is the bad guy… and maybe some words of Chaz triggered his "bad nerve"?

Can't wait to read more!! Please update soon!！

Mike was the serial killer, right? I doubt there was something behind Mike really terrible. Will he hurt Chester?

That was so sweet, at least he doesn't just get to it like on the other story. I really dislike Mike there, what a jerk! (not in a good way this time) but here.. He's the opposite, which makes it very very nice to read, so sweet. Thank you for the update I actually love this one <3

Chester with tattoos, my life is complete. Can an angel make those? Isn't it too much of a sin to draw on the clean body? He must get hurt too, he's white like a handkerchief.

He's dying for Michael, and that man turns out to be a demon. Can demons fall in love? Does he want Chester as a sinful desire or does he actually love him?

I let my friends read this story, they're going to love it.

Greetings

my favorite story...... :3

Wow, I didn't expect for them to be so open with their true selves. It was really interesting to read their conversation though, I love how intrigued they are with each other despite being completely opposite beings. I especially loved the scene where they showed each other their wings, I can just imagine how beautiful they'd look with wings... Great chapter, but I'm so confused about the killings and how Chester and Michael may be involved with them. Can't wait to read more, update soon!

CHESTER LOVES MICHAEL TOO MUCH BUT HES A DEMON