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Will you wait for me? by Hazle Grace

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From: nab

Date: 2015-03-04

Chapter: 5

I love it. Thank u so much for writing an amazing fic. You're one of my favourite author on lpf, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Rated

From: trishia

Date: 2015-02-26

Chapter: 5

omg so beautifull..*dries tears* bby chaz

From: metalidentity

Date: 2015-02-25

Chapter: 5

loved it so much just like Eyes like a car crash. damn you are so good. I felt their feelings as if they were my own. please write more stories like these...

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2015-02-25

Chapter: 5

You made me spill a tear. This was so heartfelt, warm, and absolutely touching. I could see how you must have struggled with putting this out; I suffer from the same problem where I know the emotional aspect of what I want to write, but don't know how to wind the plot around it. But in saying that, you don't cease to amaze me. This was beautiful. I mean it. I especially loved Mike's confession and how he apologised. It was very genuine and strong. You're a great writer. A really good one. Thank you for sharing this with us, I can't wait for more for you.


Love,


Mary.

From: Hailey

Date: 2015-02-25

Chapter: 5

Sweetest ending ever. :-)

From: wz

Date: 2015-02-25

Chapter: 5

So where in the world was this bad? You have to tell me. I loved it and I read it from beginning to end again because it gave me good memories of when you first started it. Don't tell me this is bad, it's really everything but that. I loved it, so much. The beginning was the usual creepy whispering that happened in my head while I read through, it made the story more interesting to be followed. I like how you managed putting the feelings into it, the way Chester felt lost and everything seemed cold, but then he found peace again. Perfect, impressive, fantastic. And the ending, when he felt safe again, it gave me this warm feeling like a cozy blanket in a cold night, it's the kind of happiness your stories make me feel after all the drama. You're the greatest. I'd love more from you!

From: NatalyT

Date: 2015-02-25

Chapter: 5

SO SWEET I ALMOST CRIED ♡♡

From: eggplant

Date: 2014-09-27

Chapter: 3

If Mike decides it's best for him to get wasted, I think as a friend Chester should support him.

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-09-27

Chapter: 3

This was just a hundred times more painful and awful from Chester's point of view. I don't know if I've ever been so pissed off at a character in a story before now. Mike has a shitty habit of burying his feelings and acting the opposite of what he really wants. Chester must be so exasperated now, 18 months is so long to put up with Mike's issues, and he never even complained or anything. I'm so anxious now for the last chapter to each story, to see if it's a sad ending or happy ending, or maybe in between. However you decide to end it, I can't wait to read it :)

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-09-25

Chapter: 3

mikes mind is falling apart... chester keep him where he is!!!

From: wz

Date: 2014-09-25

Chapter: 3

What is Mike doing? Please.. Wake up Shinoda, he loves you and having sex with random women might be a pleasure for the minute but it won't last. He forgot too many things all together. You're a talented writer

From: Kaph

Date: 2014-09-25

Chapter: 3

I feel for Mike.

From: nab

Date: 2014-09-25

Chapter: 3

This hurts so much more from Chester's POV. Amazing writing, as always. For Mike's sake, I hope he will sober up soon before he lose Chester for good.

From: Chesterella

Date: 2014-09-09

Chapter: 3

I love this so much. too much.

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-09-06

Chapter: 3

This made me wanna cry, Chester is so caring and loves Mike so much, all he wants is to help and be there for him, and I feel like Mike took advantage of that. Bad Mikey! No using Chester, he's way too kind and sweet for that. I just hope that Mike will actually realize how amazing of a friend Chester has been, and start treating him the way he deserves to be treated. Really great chapter, every time I read this or "Eyes Like A Car Crash" I try to decide which one I like better, and I just can't do it. They're so different, two completely different points of view, but they're in perfect harmony with each other. I can't imagine one story without the other, they'd just be incomplete somehow. I've never seen an author post two different stories dealing with the same plot, but you've done it beautifully, and I love how unique it is. Can't wait for your next update :)

From: RASH

Date: 2014-09-06

Chapter: 3

I LOVE THE LOVE

From: RASH

Date: 2014-09-06

Chapter: 3

THIS STORY HAS TOO MUCH LOVE

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-09-05

Chapter: 3

Im reading this so many times ♡ omf beautiful

From: trishia

Date: 2014-09-05

Chapter: 3

this is so perfect

From: Kaph

Date: 2014-09-05

Chapter: 3

I prefer the feelings in your stories then in most.

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